 Thiaf Yeroled 2008-08-28 . chapter 21You make it terribly hard for us poor disabled and seizure-prone House fans to comprehend what the heck you're talking about half the time, but this story is ridiculously awesome, so you are forgiven. |
 Thiaf Yeroled 2008-08-27 . chapter 18?
Okay, um, explanation please? I'm sorry if it's just my own Aspergers-riddled mind, but that last scene really, really does not make sense, at least not to me. >> I shall continue on, and see if you explain later... |
 Thiaf Yeroled 2008-08-27 . chapter 7Gyah. You are aware that there are House fans who are more emotionally thick than him and will not comprehend vague references to whatever emotions the characters might be feeling, right? D; Lol. Awesome story so far, though. |
 Thiaf Yeroled 2008-08-27 . chapter 5So far, so very good. ;O |
 Thiaf Yeroled 2008-08-27 . chapter 1I hate it when people use FIVE paragraphs to describe an area as "dark and desolate", personally. >< I think four should probably be the limit... After four paragraphs, I advise you to get on with the story, rather than the setting, 'cause it gets kinda irritating. =/ The six paragraph-y-thing even had a bit more setting-descriptions in it, as well, but it was describing something other than what the past five had been going for, and thus is acceptable. Please, prose is nice and all, but a fascinating plot is better. I'll get back to you later on whether or not the plot makes up for it...
So far, so good. |
 med-anomaly 2007-11-25 . chapter 21There's something very enjoyable about the way you write these two. It's different, but it works. Hope you'll have a new one out soon. :) |
 gh2005 2007-11-23 . chapter 21Sorry it took me so long to read the final chapter--I didn't want it to end. I'm going to miss your daily updates until your next one. I loved this one.
Hope you had a Happy Thanksgiving.
Til next time. |
 DXRULES103 2007-11-18 . chapter 21That same best friend was doing his damndest to live up to his title, and had a silly smile on his face when Gregory House’s jaw dropped in surprise and reached out his hand to accept “the only present I’d ever given him that he’d been able to use …”
Then he turned toward me with his opposite hand … the lame one … his eyes snapping blue sparks … and cuffed my chin gently with the backs of his fingers.
It was the best “thank you” I had ever received.
House chuckled, took the damned necktie and looped it back around my neck … in the same fashion as I’d had kept it hanging there for the past two days.
My favorite part of course. I just love that red necktie.
Well, this will be the last review for this story from me. Ah, I'm going to miss this story but I'm happy with it. You made a perfect piece of art. I love it.
Yes, Wilson loves House. Who doesn't? Okay, don't answer that. But thank you for sharing with me and the rest of the FanFiction world.
Love,
Lexi |
 Knightgirl4Jack 2007-11-18 . chapter 21The end? No it's too soon. Such a perfect story and it's over? That is really mean. What about your loyal supporters!? How will I survive? |
 Knightgirl4Jack 2007-11-18 . chapter 20Apply directly to the forehead! I can't stand those ads. But I might make your soup for my mom if I can get the ingredients. I like to cook and I had a dream about it. It was weird. A sign I guess. |
 Fyrerayne 2007-11-18 . chapter 21Well, that had me squeeing like a fangirl. GAH! OMG! The best EVAH! Betz you outdone yourself this time. Great job. ::huggles::
-ANimal |
 BSEVER 2007-11-18 . chapter 21"All the important things that needed to be said had been said. All the amends that needed to be made had been made"
THAT will be my review, do you mind ? ;-)
I'll add though :
- that you did it in a brilliant way, nice, gentle, always clever and sensitive
- that even if some scenes were painful to read (not because of your writing, you, fool...because of the awful situation House and Wilson found themselves) you wrote them without falling into this pathetic mauldry style I so can't abide
- and that I LOVE YOU TOO :-)
THANKS for this once again tremendous trip you so generously offered to us.
And don't stay away too long from the FFKingdom. Otherwise, I could easily wilt. Please ?
;-) |
 kismetindy 2007-11-17 . chapter 21Lovely ending. |
 anitablakevampirehunter 2007-11-17 . chapter 21This story was fantastic! I really enjoyed the Wilson and House dynamic again, and the red neck tie throughout the story was great!
Looking forward to your next story!
Hollie
: ) |
 chaoskir 2007-11-17 . chapter 21Even you think I´m a bronw-noser you set the happenings of season three and their aftermath in a right line or in a right view for me. Thank you. Your fic came to the right time for all those House-watcher who just watch the german tv and who don´t watch DVD´s because last thuesday there was the epi in the german tv in wich the Tritter-arc ends. After I watched the whole season three on DVD I missed something but I can´t say exactly what precisely. Your story let me back with more aceptance for the feelings, the friendship, the acts and deeds and all what has happend with our both boys. If you would asking me I would say this story should never ends. But yeah, I know, I know all the good stuff ends sometimes, somewhere or somehow. I get it, don´t say a word. I don´t say that you are a wonderful author. You know that and you know that I want to read more from your feather. Well, I do hope that you are working on your next story.
Thanks a lot for this great and emphatetically written story. Even if you don´t want it: I bow for you and disappear untill I can read your next one *winkgoodbye* |