This story was really good. I honestly watched TDAT for the first time last night and I loved it, and this story made me feel all fluffy and warm inside. The only thing I really had a problem with were some typos or grammar errors, but there was only a few. Either way, the story was really good and I liked it.
Great, great job. =]

-Jesse [PopRox]

that was a cute TDAT fic..love the fluffiness...

this is your first fanfic. eh? well i almost didn't belive you untill it was written again in the reviews...this is awsome, probably my favorite! Keep doing what you're doing 'cause it's perfection! :)

It had a potential, but needs cleaned up and less corny, mushy romance

LOVED THIS! Great job!


-love love love-
~KissingMercury

hey,That was awesome!I can't wait until the next chapter!i'm so excited i finally got to read those.They are amazing i wish i could write like you.keep writing!and i can't wait to read your next storys also!

Very nice story can't wait 4 the epioluge it was great!

Great story Rach. Lol YAY EPILOGUE! Exelent cheeziness...meh, he cried :( but the tears turned to ice so that would be cold. What if his eyelashes got frozen solid, then whenever he blinked he would be SO screwed lol...Any keep up the good work and keep writing in class!

Omg intense! Man, you better type quickly cuz i need to read the end of this lol xD.

Enjoy your writing during reading period! haha :P

So far so good! Don't stop.

ChristinexErik]

He is fascinated
She is terrified
He wants to love her harshly
He wants to hurt her
Passionately
And for a moment
Just before she screams
She wants it very badly too

+

She doesn’t have any friends anymore
They all packed up and went away
All her little selves are gone
She is still
Worshipping the worship she remembers
Dollie girl left
With her fine cracked porcelain



[ChristinexRaoul]

Little Lottie cries for more
And he tells her what it’s like
She doesn’t know he’s thinking dirty thoughts of her
He doesn’t like her dress so white

+

He moves his mouth with albatross grace
He doesn’t know what he’s saying
He’s trying to manage lightness in the form of a stone
But Lottie doesn’t pay attention
Her fingers ich for his hair
She is too good to say she doesn’t care
She wants him to push scream into her lungs



[MegxRaoul]

She kisses him because he asked her to
His schoolboy hands are exploring with inexperience
He is not what he says he is
But she isn’t looking at him
She betrays his touch with a glance

+

He loves he loves he loves Christine
But Meg can’t think about that now
Her lips are too busy with his
And he is too busy not thinking of her

+

Meg lets all the boys put their hands up her skirt
Raoul has done it twice
The stagehand says he has, but Raoul isn’t sure
The ballet girls talk about her on stage
Two of them have done it too
Raoul wants very much to rip her pretty dress apart

That's a cool fanfic... lol not much else to say. bye!

--Menzies

omg,write more ! i have been writing storys for 74 years and this is the most amazing story ! i really like lauras dream sequence its my favorite i cant wait to here the next chaptires... The first chapter is also amazing! maybe i will try to add more make out scences to my stores ! Have fun writeing!

Both POV's were well done so it was a great chapter. Can't wait for more!

aw...Cute. One of my fave movies is day after tommorrow. Good good movie...