Here's a cookie for thinking of a common sense question for the game that isn't answered: and at the same time actually keeping the characters IN character rather than bashing one of them or having one character go 'woe is me.'

I'm lazy, but I just couldn't copy and paste my comments here. Once again, yes, I think everyone is very in-character here. I mean, you've even got all Linebeck's nicknames right. XD Tee hee! Frantic Linebeck ish funny! XD It is so sickeningly sweet that WinLi's considerate for Linebeck. ^^ *sing-song* Linebeck has a soft spot for his little green parrot~! X3

I promised a fave, so here it is! *pokes you to write more*

Hahaha, I never quite thought of how Linebeck would take to me all of a sudden changing his ship into something recognizable...heh. Cute!

Sweet! I always wondered how Linebeck felt about his ship being changed.

You kept his character perfect! Congrats!

Aw! Cute!
I like this story a lot!
Heh, never really thought about how Becky would react to changing his ship... >:)
Great job in keeping Becky's personality. :)

congrats, i've added you to my community! it's acctualy a shining example of what I like to see.

Calling him WinLink is stupid, especially when even characters refer to him as that.
But other than that, this is a very good story, I think you kept Linebeck in character.

I assume it's called Piece of Heart because changing parts gives you more ship stamina.

Aww this is cute ^^ poor Link..
(this is AnimeThorn btw)