Very good, thank you for something on Orihime that doesn’t treat her as an airhead with fluff for brains. Her thoughts regarding Ichigo and Rukia were also well done.

Very realistic Orihime thoughts, I loved it. I liked the stream-of-consciousness of it, even if it's a little harder to follow because it seemed to be truer to Orihime than set out, logically plotted snippets would be. Thanks for the good read, and keep up the excellent writing!

ahh man it ended just like that! and it was really getting good! seriously though i did really enjoy it and it seemed so realistic that even i was blushing when she thought of Ichigo touching her!^_~

It sounds just like Orihime. Very characteristic :D

Contrary to what some might think, she didn’t have more boobs than brains. =P
I liked it =)
It had its funny, thoughtful parts that were Inoue-like and her feelings towards Rukia were well-done.
Good job!