Great story. I think it works really well with their characters and it was an issue for me the fact that the Doctor destroys the whole of Italy like he was throwing out junk mail. You should write more on The Authority.

I'm glad you wrote this. The death of Italy was so strongly horrific, the Authority have to react in some personal fashion, thanks

Great! I just finished reading the first compilation of the Authority (issues 1-8) and went looking for fanfic, because I've fallen in instant, hard-core love with the characters and the tone and... yeah. And you got 'em. So just thought I'd drop you a line to say thanks, and I really enjoyed it. *g*

I liked that very much! I love Hawkmore and the gang....I would love to see you write more of these!

I like gin.

Wow. This is an exceptional piece, touching on a few concepts that Warren Ellis did not have the time to show and delving rather nicely into Angie and Jack-nice touch having Jack feel the deaths of the cities in Italy by the way. I'm at present working on a post Authority #12 fanfic and this piece has set the bar for me to aim at,rather high in fact

Not bad. Did a good job capturing the moment and addressed some issues Ellis glossed over. Wish you'd explore the effect the nanotech has had on Angie and the feelings she and Hawksmoor have.

A very good character piece. It dealt with the issue at hand and made everyone's actions a bit more understandable. A fine job.

This is gorgeous ... a really fine, well-motivated, deeply thoughtful look at Angie and Jack, at their reactions to the devastation they both cause and allow to happen. My proverbial hat is off to you. Bravo. Bravo.