NICE!! I really do hope there is a sequel.

O my god! That was so amazing! And creepy. I love your stories. You have a real talent, and it wouldn't surprise me if you already had a published book out. (Of course, I couldn't possibly know, since there is physically no evidence that Ellen Brand is your real name.) Still, keep up the good work!

*Mouth Opens* This is a great story. I think I've reread this about 4 times and it doesn't get old.

Aside from only one small thing I have to nit-pick, this is a great story. The only problem I have is a small flaw in character information. Hakuba Saguru has brown eyes, not blue ones. This is revealed in the anime serie's episodes 219 (second half), episode 479 (second half) and movie 10. It is understandable that many don't know this as manga is, after all, in black and white and Sabura's introduction in the anime was in a very late episode in the series.

This is still a horrible story which I love you for. It's taken me... three months? To get up the gahunzhas to reread it, which it -needs- as there's so much detail and awesome that it deserves a rereading. But -my god- what you did to Saguru... (shivers) A very, very good fic indeed.

>< omgsh, so cool. so sci-fi. heart pumping action is the best!!

wow. very trippy. and very well written!

all I can say is WOW WHAT A VERY GOOD FIC!

I wish that would happen on DC or MK.. though probably wont =(... but still i loved it it was so fun!!

You should really make a sequel to this one. I for one would love it. but anyway it is awesome good job. XD

Quite an interesting story. Well-written and I loved it. Thank you ^^

Dude. What an ending. Encore!

This is awesome! I'd love to see more of it. :)

Urg! The story was so incredibly awesome, and then you left it off with that suspenseful and intriguingly ending... I will have to throw an angry cat at you if you are not making a sequel.

*runs of to find sequel*

A picture you might like judging from a line in this story:

http (colon) //s187 (dot) photobucket (dot) com/albums/x66/YoshimiKurosaki9/?action=view¤t=Hakuba-punctuality (dot) gif

Just replace (dot) with . and you're good. :)

And anyway...what happened to Hakuba!? He's infected!? TT,TT No fair...

I love it though! Amazing story! (my gut was clenching when Roboto-san found Kaito there in the warehouse!)

-Yoshimi Kurosaki

Buh.

WANT. SEQUEL. NOW.

...Please?

Anyway, that was totally awesome, good use of a canon character to write a completely new story, you did good with the characters, and your style of writing is descriptive and funny and brilliant. Basically - this story is just as wonderful as all the others of yours which I have read. :D