This was a really cool (really LONG) fic:) I was surprised how much I liked reading it because I usually dont like Hakuba fics but this was really good:)
I absolutely loved this line:
you keep it inside anyway, because there's only one thing worse than knowing someone hates you because you lied. And that's knowing they died because you didn't."
Oh my holy shits how much I love this line! I love how it perfectly encapsulates the reasons for both Conan and KID's lies. Wonderful:) Ooohhh chills every time I read it:)
Cool fic!

O.O...
That...
Was...
Amazing!
So good I love it X3 I soooo need a sequel to this! But I don't think that would do the story any good. The ending is really awesome, but it just leaves you needing more Xd
Anyway, nicely done ,

Wow. That. Was. Pure. AWESOME.

That was awesome. I love story with Robo Kaito in the Manga and that was one heck of a sequel. Most I like the idea to give any person a gem and the Robo one would steal that one.
Will you right more because of that cliff-hanger at the end?

This was really well written.

Ooooh. Good cliff hanger. That was surprising...descriptive. Loved the beating heart.

(Oh but really, it's not that bad. Just think of it as a composition of some cardiovascular muscles with some iron-fortified blood. Or some really old, hard cotton candy.)

( Sorry about that. I tend to get a little too realistic sometimes.)

But anyways, great piece of work. the description of the robot somewhat scared me though. Always had a weakness to those humanoids, aliens, etc. etc.

Great job! :)

Not bad at all. The ending seemed a tad cliche, but whatever, the rest of it was wonderfully done.

Brilliant. Marvelously executed. I like how you ended it with Hakuba questioning his humanity a little, leaving the mind wondering just where this could possibly go in future.

Keep up the good work!

Angel

Wow.

I read this story a long time ago and I wanted to read it again... AND I FOUND IT! :D

I love this story so much... It's AMAZING. Truly incredible. The detail in quite intricate and all the characters are perfect. Very curious ending...

Happy Birthday Hakuba!

Thanks for writing this. Truly.

Wow. Like, wow. WOW. This story was amazing. Ever think of making a sequal for it? Or maybe a crossover with these characters because they are sooo cool! I still say this is wow though.

It's creepy and scary and a bit frightening but I love it. It makes me think of exactly what the robot Kid did to Hakuba and if he did anything to Aoko or Conan. While it is extremely unlikely with Conan as he wasn't there all that long, that would be vaguely awesome.

While I feel slightly sorry for the robot Kid, he deserved what happened to him after what he did. That chapter in Magic Kaito always strikes me as odd, so to see a fanfiction on it is delightful.

Thank you for the story! .

Ja ne!

J. DCF

Wow. Just... Woah. I mean... That was intense. And rather sad. Pretty creepy too. Also... I'm not sure what I think of the ending. I kinda feel bad for Hakuba. I could telll when nearin g the end, that this would have a rather open ending. But a sequel just wouldnt fit right. Ack, I loved it, totally well written. Poor everyone :,(

Good grief, ALL of your work is ending up on my favorites page! This was such a fun story to read. I usually read at the pace of a lame turtle, but I seriously whipped through this.

"If sanity is a sliding scale, one being normal and ten being completely nuts, you'd have a score of Q. Your mind isn't broken, it just runs at right angles to the rest of humanity. Basically, it was like trying to run a Mac graphics program on a graphing calculator that emulates Windows." - LOL. This is pure gold. I love Conan's cold blunt logic.

Will there ever be a sequel to this? This has the potential to become a prologue to an even bigger more awesome story. I can even sketch out a pretty good plot line depending on the AU that I want to stick it in. I just don't think I could do proper justice to the story with my rather untried and pitiful writing abilities. I wouldn't mind teaming up with someone, if it were up for adoption that is. I definitely would take a crack at it if you were willing to beta. In short, awesomely great story and I sincerely wish that there was more.

This story is one of my favorites of all the story's I've read so far ever. I read it some time ago but after a while I read it again and I'm sure I will come back to it some time later too. Something I usually never do. It's brilliant, just like most of the other story's you write actually. I read all of your detective Conan story's and they are really well written.