o. i like this alot. very much. I do hope he isnt planning on bashing her hands in like he did with the other girl. As a piano player myself i winced at that. very cruel. I shall be waiting for the next update with anticipation and excitment.

My, my, my! I truly can't wait to see where this is going! Nice job, so far! :)

This is good! You should update. I like the way he's potrayed like classic psycopath—and I felt 'the awkwardness and seething angst that is Tom Riddle!' And you don't need to comand me it was there in your writing. Did I tell you how much I like this? Its original.

Pip-pip cheerio!I has no idea what that means...

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Tom is feeling cranky and pubescant today and he doesn't know why! He's going to take it out on people he is generally indeifferent towards, but sometimes hates! GR!

"Gee, Riddle you need Ritalin..."

"What is this Ritalin? Is it a potion? I've never heard of it, so that means its not of the wizarding world."

"Shut it Mr. Bananapants, you dont know everything. Hell, I'd wager you haven't the faintest notion what that SPECIAL FEELING in your trousers was when you were watching that girl..."

"I, uh...um...SILENCE YOU IMPERTINENT WENCH!"

"No, I'm busy right now Bananapants. So hush ad let the grown ups talk"

Anyway, good job Remus.

You really captured the mannerisms and machinations of the prepubescant TMR. I love how devious, obsessive, and spiteful he is here. See what most people don't get is that ole Moldipants was fucked up his whole life. And stupid people like that little bitch what said she hates you deserve to be severely flogged and left for dead. Stupid people...prolly a slash mongering Voldie worshipper...and likely a fifteen year old...but we all know you don't count as a person til you're eighteen...so We win...

Way to go Remus.

Wow, great job loved it. updtae soon please.

I hate you. >:[