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| Telcontar Rulz 2008-06-01 ch 20,  | abuseI did like the story :) And are we to expect a mini-Paris/Helen soon? *g* |
| solarstar 2008-05-26 ch 19, | abusegreat story, can't wait for the rest of it. |
| Telcontar Rulz 2008-05-18 ch 19, | abuseHmm, I wonder what you will do with the horse. Will Legolas think of something drastic? I suppose I'll just have to wait. Good chapter. |
| Alaenor-Skybird 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abuseWell, I'm not too familiar with Troy, so I can't really send a serious review, but let's just say this: It HAS been done before. Many, many times. In fact, I've seen Troy, Kingdom of Heaven, PotC and LotR crossovers done AT THE SAME TIME. I have no problem with crossovers if they're done really well, but just know you are following a cliche. ~ Alaenor |
| Telcontar Rulz 2008-05-04 ch 18, | abuseSo you're still going to have the wooden horse :) I like that. Wonder how the Fellowship will deal with it. And why is Boromir so angry at Merry and Pippin? Good writing. Be careful of grammatical mistakes though. There were a couple, nothing big. |
| Ne'ith5 2008-05-03 ch 18, | abuseSo the famous horse appears at last. Will it have the expected end? I hope not! But I'm willing to see where you take us. Great chapter I hope the hobbits finally get whats coming to them. |
| Telcontar Rulz 2008-04-21 ch 17, | abuseConsidering you had Patroclus live, Achilles wouldn't have much incentive to kill Hector. Love the hobbits. They add a degree of innocent fun to every situation. Good work on the chapter. Hope to see more soon. |
| Black_Rose 2008-04-21 ch 17, anon. | abuseDon't kill Hector and let Troy stand! :) |
| Ne'ith5 2008-04-20 ch 17, | abuseKill Hector or not, let Troy fall or not,... Please don't kill Hector or let Troy fall after all you allowed both Patroclus and Achilles to live and Helen has remained with Paris so go the rest of the way and allow Troy to stand. Hector can inherent Troy from Priam his father and Paris can go on to found The city that will become Rome. Think of what could've been saved if Rome had been founded by the proud citizen of Troy instead of the grim survivor farmer/soldiers the descendent's of vanquished Troy. |
| mychemicalromancefreak29 2008-04-10 ch 16, | abuseThis is a really good chapter too. Hope you are going to continue writing more. |
| Lucine Najarian 2008-03-27 ch 16, | abuseI really enjoyed this story so far. I have one request: please do not kill Hector. I love him dearly. I love how Legolas is so protective of Paris and Patroclus it is very endearing. Keep up the great work! |
| Ne'ith5 2008-03-27 ch 16, | abuseYou've mixed two of my faves and done an admirable job of it as well! My favorite part is where Achilles sees his cousin Patroclus is still alive. You have done to the Trojan War exactly what needed to be done to it. All I ask is the next chapter...soon please. :) |
| Telcontar Rulz 2008-03-26 ch 16, | abuseAt least Boromir survives, for the time being. Actually, Achilles hates Agamemnon and given any excuse, I think he would kill the Greek king (without staining his honour, of course). But it's a good thing you had him stand down, because he would've stolen the show otherwise. |
| Black_Rose 2008-03-22 ch 15, anon. | abuseone more thing: NO not Boromir! |
| Black_Rose 2008-03-22 ch 15, anon. | abusewondeful crossover! update more often!..that's all I can say really, no negatives here :) |