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| time16 2008-07-07 ch 12,  | abuseJust read your last chapter and it was a wonderful story at all. It was great to see that Lee in the end see´s what he had rigth in front of him. Maybe your next BSG story will be a Lee/Kara one again. Would be nice. |
| xan-merrick 2008-07-03 ch 12, | abusethis has been a great story and i'm sad its over i can't to read your next BSG fic i hope its a lee/kara story |
| Entilzha 2008-07-02 ch 12, | abuseThank you for the great story :) |
| arielmoondance 2008-07-02 ch 12, | abuseFantastic way to end the fic. I loved the use of Kara's death et al to help Lee realize what he has right in front of him. Well done! |
| gatelover 2008-07-02 ch 12, | abuseI did like the way you left it off. I understand that we didn't need Kacey to witness her mother's death. Interesting how you gave Lee the visions and how he began making amends with her and his father. Lovely story. Can't wait to see what you start next. |
| gatelover 2008-07-02 ch 11, | abuseI am glad the Old Man didn't know what Roslin did. Glad that even with everything happening, Helo was there for Kara. Surprised to see that Lee was being honest with Sam of all people. I think he may have realized that may just may be he was too harsh on Kara and his father about Kacey. Great chapter |
| darth rat 2008-07-02 ch 12, | abuseOMG! I love this story! It is always sad to see a great story end. Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story. Thank you so much for writing it. |
| Elliesmeow 2008-07-01 ch 12, | abuseAwesome. I agree with the place you've ended this fic. I think it's the right one too. Nice job. Glad Bill didn't know about Hera. -Ellie |
| Gune23 2008-07-01 ch 12, | abuseReally happy with the update! I love the fact that you arent really sticking with whats happened with the series (With kacey in things i suppose you cant really lol) If you get lee out of defending baltar and still in vipers ill love you forever hehe. This is still one of my favorite BSG fics to date so i cant wait to see more. Keep up the great work man :P |
| Jess 2008-06-19 ch 10, anon. | abuseLove this so far. Keep it coming :) |
| Artemis90 2008-06-19 ch 10, | abuseThanks for continuing. The Cylons jumps in just as Kara and Kacey lifts off. How will Lee react? Mission or Kacey? And can he forgive the Admiral (esp. since I think he is the least culpable one?) |
| Chicklit 2008-06-17 ch 10, | abuseI'm very happy to see an update to this story. I always enjoy the maturity that you apply toward these characters -- Your assertion that Kara accepts some things "can't be fixed" is so true to who she is and the nature of her relationship with Lee. More, please! |
| gatelover 2008-06-17 ch 10, | abuseGreat chapter. At least those two are being somewhat civil to each other for Kacey's sake. I think Lee might have finally understood where Kara is coming from he turns his pain into rage and she turns her into guilt and fear. Hope the raptor makes it off the planet and Kacey doesn't have to witness her mother burning her hands off. Even now Kara is trying mend Lee and Adama's relationship. Somethings never change. Great chapter |
| xan-merrick 2008-06-17 ch 10, | abusegreat chapter i love the interaction between lee and kacey i'm hoping that lee will be able to forgive kara at some point and the 3 of them will be a family. this is a great story i can't wait for more please update soon |
| LizaGirl 2008-06-16 ch 10, | abuseI love this. Poor Lee, he's been through so much, but at the same time, I'm always a sucker for emotionally vunerable Kara... What are you planning for the elder Adama? I love Lee/Adama issues... |