Guess how many spelling and grammar mistakes there are? Over 90!

Okay, it would have worked had some discrepanies not shown up:

(1) Baby Weezing don't exist. All babies are Koffings.

(2) Even if Arbok and Weezing COULD mate with Meowth,LICKITUNG(sp),and WOBBUFFET(sp) - well, Weezing could mate with Wobbuffet because both are in the same breeding group - the babies are always the same as the female Pokemon. That means that Arbok and Weezing had to be FEMALE for baby Koffing and Ekans.

(3) Giovanni wouldn't accept those Pokemon,he would go for baby Wobbuffet(or Wynaut,the new Hoenn pre-evolution of it) for rarity. Also, I think that Gio wouldn't let Jessie and James leave Team Rocket so easily because they could betray him to the police.

(4) Finally,Wobbuffet and Lickitung are NOT water Pokemon. Wobbuffet is psychic,Lickitung is normal.

To all of those, uh, *slightly disoriented* people who have commented about the grammar etc., this is the world-famous Dr. Thinker you are talking about, and do you know what he's world-famous for? That's right - bad grammar and spelling!

you know, 'what if' stories are usually either very good or very bad. Guess which this is. (here's a hint. The word 'the' is not optional, and most people use tenses)

Interesting idea, but it doesn't really come off too well. You continually spelled Giovanni as 'Gionavii' and it's 'Cassidy' not 'Cassie' (To go with the pun of 'Butch Cassidy'). Many little spelling errors and grammatical errors throughout, some which are highly forgivable ('its' and 'it's') and some that are not (James' 'We been watched' line stood out like a sore thumb).

If you run this through spell-checker, edited it and focused more on the fact Meowth was a girl this would be a much better read, but as it stands it's fairly poor.

This is not a 'flame', just constructive criticism. I don't 'flame' things. It's just not nice :P

Oh, and one little factual error. Mondo is not an actual 'Rocket'- Just a trainee. He does not go on missions, merely give Team Rocker their expenses, lunch, new Nyarth balloons (YES, it's spelled that way! Buy the drama and see for yourself!) and praise galore. He is *NOT* a field member (Like Jessie and James). He's simply, well, a suck-up, so to speak(But a cute one). I should know, I have the drama (I highly recommend all self-proclaimed Rocket fans to buy- Tres magnifique!)

-Musachan, over and out!

A nice and cute story, don't let the other reviewers get you down

scary...

Hey Dr. Thinker! Glad to see you writing again! How DO you write that way anyway?

And remember: "Gyra famous on Ami!" -Pickle-

Dee...it's Dr. Thinker. It's SUPPOSED to be badly written! He even asked me to MiST one of his fics!

this is very poorly written