I find that this story is extremely similar to your fanfic Just Once? (Thats good not bad)

:) I love both though. Thanks for writing these EdRoy fanfics! I'll remember them for a long time. :3

sooo hot...

Great job! :D

Well, to me, I have only one opinion on this story.

IT'S AWESOME!

I can't believe how well-written this story is. You are so talented at this kind of stuff. I am just ADDICTED to this story! So awesome! Keep on writing!

-redchicken888

I like the premise of this story but I think there needed to be some more plot involved, like something dangerous happening to Ed to make Roy realize his love for him. I also thought Ed was way too OOC. I would have loved to see him be a bit more of his spitfire self and get revenge on Roy, go out with someone else to make him jealous or something like this. The story was still good but I think making Ed's character a little more like himself (i.e. not showing so much emotion) would greatly improve it.

This has got to be the greatest Roy/Ed fanfic I have ever read. Fave

are you going to update this? it said END so i didn't know if it was the end of the chapter, or the story

Hi, i just finished reading your full metal fanfic and it was great. I dont really have a lot of constructive criticism for you, but the one thing I raelly like about the story is that it really draws u in at the beginning. Im usually not one to go for the multiple chapter fanfics but i think it definately helped that it had a lemony sence throughout the whole story.. Just thought id comment on it and hopefully ill be able to read more of ur fanfics! ( by the way congradulations on being the first person i ever comment! lol)

Your story was beautiful. Excellently well written, lovely plot. But this can't be the ending... there has to be a sequel. What does Roy does with Riza? Does anyone know about their relationship?

I DEMAND A SEQUEL...

Great story! Loved it!

Magnificent! I feel all teary-eyed now TT

Anyway, just wanted to say how much I loved it!

aw! thats so sweet! i love it.

lol. nice brokeback mountain dialog there

the part where ed cried i thought i might too it was so... i can't explane it, but it went to the smex that was a let down. i wanted ed to get a bit more angry and run away the have mustang come after hm in a romantic love hate kind of way. but your story is very holding of my atenchion good job

i think it great so far

aww yay happy ending

the bathroom scene was hot

wish there was a sequel

wanna see what happens when the others find out

this fic has inspired me to write one x

i hate roy in this chap

how dare u toy with eds LITTLE heart