awesome story, i wanna read more, when are you gonna write the next chapter??

hi there Newbie GK-sama !
this story is really sweet, i loved the interaction between shun and nanao
but poor shunsui, i hope that you're not planning on killing his kawaii nanao-chan ...!

à bientôt !

I really like it ! I hope there will be an update one day... I really want to know what happened next

OMGosh! This was written so well! I love this story!

This is so sweet and sad! I really hope you decide to finish this!

Hello there! I'm going to be your new reviewer for this fan-fiction! =D

I really loved how you portrayed Nanao and Kyouraku in their conversation before the entire mission and such. I felt a moment of great tension, and you've worded it very well!

Anyway, I really hope that you add the next chapter to this very soon!

you are EVIL...:-D don't leave us hanging update soon!

this chapters end wasnt as cliffy as the others have been..thanks...i still like it :)

Oh. WOW. It's action-packed, gooey and you totally deserve a cookie. Lots and lots of 'em, in fact. The fight scene was great, but I somewhat doubt that Nanao would plung into battle almost suicidality. Although the previous events do explain it a bit. No matter; please continue! WOT!

I dunno, "Come and get me" sounded kinda cheesy XP

Heyy, sorry about a late read and review, but life gets unbearably busy, so no worries about a late update (:
Enjoyed this chapter greatly, and good job on the fight scene and the description of it was written beautifully. I could picture the fight really well in my mind. Yea, fight scenes are hard to write, they can come up all confusing when written.
Heh, it seemed like the only thing Nanao could say was "Sir" and "Taicho" in the beginning. Reading Shunsei shout for the first time and seeing the other side of him was cool, it really brought his character alive. Also good job at creating Nanao's zanpakto, good name too Karasukuro and nice meaning behind it. When you wrote that she took of her glasses i suddenly got an image of cyclops from X-men, then i thought "Hang on, wrong story completely!" But i liked it, and good bit of creativeness going there.
Anyway, i did very much enjoy reading this chapter, and will be waiting for the epilogue, and can't wait to find out what happens.
Keep up the awesome work (:
AMb

Woah! This was amazing! Loved the tension and I also loved the action! Thx for sharing.

Nanao-chan! T T no
I should be used to these cliffhangers by now. That was just cruel though! Please update this! I have a feeling it may be coming to an end...T T

Gah! Even though I expected a cliffhanger- REALLY??

I like your interpretation of Nanao's zanpakuto. It fits her, I think. Hopefully someday we'll actually find out what it is, but in the meantime, I think yours is a pretty good guess.

Update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

nanao-chan T_T O.o update son!