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| JJ-Reid-01 2008-01-08 ch 5, | abuseThis is Great story. Poor JJ, of course my fav. Character, but the dog is so cute I want her to like him :) Cannot wait for some more |
| IllStandByYou87 2008-01-04 ch 5, | abuseI love this story! Please continue it soon. The psychoanalysis was great. I love how you're showing how it affected JJ. It's true. Everyone focused on Reid and left her to pick up the pieces all by herself. Any story about JJ is great, I mean as long as it's well written which yours clearly is. JJ fans unite! |
| butterfly-92 2007-12-17 ch 5, | abuseWow .. I just LOVE all of yout storys! :) keep it up |
| sydcasy 2007-12-16 ch 5, | abuseCan't wait for more :-)Hope you'll update soon. |
| Shlay 2007-12-15 ch 5, | abuse*throws money and bows at your feet* I really like this story. Keep it going. |
| Claudette 2007-12-08 ch 5, | abuseHm...I'm definitely going to have to find out more about the BAU's history. I'm a little slow to catch onto this series so I think I've missed some of the back history. Presumably the team will be visiting a few of the other crime sites - although they will be quite old by now. My money is on the killer seeing all disabled people as 'mutants' - hence the 'm' carving. Nasty sort of guy. |
| Claudette 2007-12-08 ch 4, | abuseI've heard about this Henkel guy but not seen the episode - I guess he must have been one nasty baddie with dogs then? Poor JJ. and, like cats, the poor 'ole doggy went straight to the one who didn't like him. Poor Rigley. I'm enjoying this. I like the way you are drawing the characters and letting us see their 'between' glances. Just one question - where is Gideon? |
| Claudette 2007-12-08 ch 3, | abuseHere doggy doggy. Nice doggy, doggy. Come and have your teeth cleaned. Let's hope someone knows how to deal kindly with traumatised dogs. |
| Claudette 2007-12-08 ch 2, | abuseDoggy dog dog. Where is the nice doggy? Blood all over his teeth - nice DNA trace. Maybe a bit of flesh as well. Maybe doggy chased after the attacker? Although I'd expect him to return to his mistress if he could - so maybe poor doggy is dead? |
| Claudette 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseTwelve murders, all with a 'signature' cut onto the victim, and all victims obviously disabled? And they've only just put two and two together? My goodness, they're not too bright are they? |
| Roma81 2007-11-19 ch 5, | abuseI'm loving the story so far. I like how you bring in what happened to JJ during the whole Henkel affair. I know if that happened to me I'd be scared as hell of big dogs. Keep it up ! |
| tearbos 2007-11-13 ch 5, | abuseI liked the psychoanalysis. I'm glad Emily is looking out for JJ, and maybe once this is over she can help her a little more. I would never underestimate Hotch. I think he's got something up his sleeve still. |
| Linda66 2007-11-13 ch 5, | abuseOh no that wasn't boring at all,i just wish they done something like this on the show...We saw how much Reid struggled with the Hankel incident but didn't see JJ's struggle,i mean anyone would be a wreck after 3 deranged Dogs attacking them after you see what was left of the previous victim...Anywho lovin the story,they say Animals have like a sixth sense so i think that the Dog sensed the fear and vulnerability in JJ is probably what the Dog was feeling and sensed there was no threat from her so felt safe with her somehow...Animals are very sensitive creatures,that's what i think anyway and they sense things alot more than what us mere Humans do... I wish they would use JJ more on the show,i don't think they use her enough but maybe that's just me... Ok enough rambling,love the story! |
| Miss Waffles 2007-11-12 ch 5, | abuseSure thing, you can message me up anytime ;) Some brainstorming would do me some good. Concerning this chapter, I loved that whole psychological in depth explanation of JJ's state of mind and emotions that you seem to be not so proud of. I'm usually a sucker for that kind of paragraphs, I just love them. And I love how you're making Emily try and be there for JJ, you know, try to be her friend and all. And still, no matter how sad or depressing you make the chapter, the 'CLICKY CLICKY' thing at the end always drives me insane with laughter. |
| Fredikayllow 2007-11-12 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter. A nice look into JJ's psyche. It's interesting that the dog has attached itself to her. Perhaps because it's a guide dog it's attuned to the suffering of others? I love how you show JJ's fears overcoming her professionalism- it's not something we see alot of on the show, but I can definitely see it happening. Like I said, a great chapter. I can't wait for the next update!! -Fred |