 Vampires Bane 2008-02-01 . chapter 14ok Everyone, Here's the link!!
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 Vanguard Dragon 2008-01-06 . chapter 13Pretty good story I understand why you want the chapters to be short but at least to some degree extend them |
 NH3 2007-12-31 . chapter 13Awesome! Make the next story soon! |
 kpluvinthis 2007-12-29 . chapter 13This story is good, really good. You should put up the sequel soon. I dont know why that other person doesnt like the story as much anymore, but I personally like it. I'm really hoping for the sequel, your writing style is really good. The plot to this is interesting, and you have a lot of good ideas in here. Keep up the good work. |
 Spog the Brick in The Wall 2007-12-19 . chapter 13Excellent (Mr. Burns style) |
 Vampires Bane 2007-12-09 . chapter 12I have recently received a review saying that they dont like the way the story is going anymore. Please, if anyone doesnt like the way the story is going. Let me know. I wll change it if at least 1 more person says they dont like the wat its going.
When Pm'ing me, please make sure you mention that its about TBOAC (the bond of a covenant)
~VB PS: I only post these reviews here as announcements in between chapters or before chapters |
 Gustavo-DPG 2007-12-09 . chapter 12...I was really liking this story, till now.
Now you just put a big cliché in the story.
It was a good story till now. |
 Vampires Bane 2007-12-08 . chapter 1I know i souldnt review my own story but. I jsut wanted to tthank everyone for the awesome compliments, advice, and questions you've been asking. I'm am definetley writing a sequel. A will post under Reviews what it will be called. And i'll let everyone know on the last chapter.
I'm just so glad that a little idea i thought of has gone this far. Thanks to everyone who reads this Fic. |
 Half-Jaw 2007-12-07 . chapter 12I mlove your story. It kind of reminds me of the story line of mine. Brothers in spirit. But instead of adults it kids. I guess good minds think alike. |
 Dragon-Tom 2007-12-05 . chapter 11I love the story. It's quite an interesting angle that not many consider. Kudo's on originality.
Hope this story keeps going! :) |
 kpluvinthis 2007-12-04 . chapter 10i love this story! im more for them actualy getting along than anything else, teasing is alright, but with kindly intentions... but anyway, keep i up! its getting really far, when i started reading it only had like two chapters... it kinda makes th tim fly by, y'now? ja ne! (see ya in japanese) |
 king of toilet town 2007-12-04 . chapter 10Im glad that Nino is starting to warm up to Ak. Also I think your writing has greatly improved! |
 Gustavo-DPG 2007-11-28 . chapter 9I am liking this story, but I think you should put something between change of scenes. |
 Chris-04 2007-11-27 . chapter 8nice |
 Chris-04 2007-11-27 . chapter 9what was your child hood like? I like it but its like u are telling how u felt when u were young. U are freaking me out. But i still like it. |