Interesting fanfic, just one thing... you might want to give the chapters another look-through, a few spelling errors and such, as well as some typos (ex. read-head instead of red-head)

Sorry. It's just my nature to point out these things, however I really like this fic.

MG#6

oh wow man. this is like really good! i hope you didn't quite this story! i really wanna know how axel and riku get outta jail! i really like the way roxas was determined about the last thing he said!:D i hope you update soon!

ARRESTED! D:

This is great! So suspensful :)

Please update when you can! I love it!

-Sassy

this have somemthing interesting...XD even for little chapters.. hehe

but don't worry, what matters is the sory no the size :P

so good luck with test and for us be quiet until next chapter.

kisses

Ooh! I like it!

Everything about this story is perfect plus the chapter aren't extremly long and I like that way! lol I can't stand it when authors make their chapters way to long lol

update soon! :]

i liked it can't wait to read the next chapter i bet it gets really good

SH: Rude a bouncer? I can see that. PAine a Bartender? I'd go with someone like Tifa if i were you. XD ANyways, I can't beleive i didn't Review for this sooner! I luvs it! *wolf whistles at Roxas, Axel lites my clothes on Fire* F*CK! XD lol and waitin for next chappie.

*SQUEAL* That was too awesome. I got a laugh out of Rude being the bouncer- XD he seems like the type now... XD And LOL at Sora's comment. That was hilarious. Poor Roxas... XD Anyway, great job so far, I hope you continue to update!

Seline-Eek! so Cute!

Alanna-Update soon!