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Mezzo
2009-08-30 . chapter 3
Just a little correction from a real German:

It's "entfernt", not "entfert"! XD
NezalXuchitl
2008-11-10 . chapter 3
Umh, i began to think that Durmstrang alumns aren't very virtous... jajaja, and you remark that in Ante Bellum.
I can“t wait for the next chapter, what gonna happen? maybe lemon? Kya! whatever it will be, will be exciting.
byebye beautiful!
pd: what is the parlour? you wrote that in the past chapter, and don't know what means...
NezalXuchitl
2008-11-10 . chapter 2
Oh, a date, I'm excited! Jajaja, your Ariana is very nice, and umh, normal? well, I imaginated her more insane, and I like to think in Gellert as a finnish (from finland jeje)... crazy me...
your tale is intersting, and the detail of the german words of Gellert is so nice, makes the character stronger.
to the next chapter!
NezalXuchitl
2008-11-10 . chapter 1
Hi again! I'm here reading more Grindeldore, jojojo, I can't get enought of this!
Thanks for your reply, was very nice, what a detail to answerme in spanish, but I'm perfectly abble to read (or listen) and understand english: my problems come at the time of speak or write, uuhuh :(
Ante bellum was an oneshot? or an other version of this story (deus moix)? whatever, I'll read you, jojojo. (I want to read all the Grindeldore i can find :) )
Well, see you.
pd: the languages that birth of latin are called "lenguas romances" in spanish *.* Oh! and I'm a girl.
TwangCat
2008-10-20 . chapter 3
This is great, there should be more Albus and Gellert fic. I like the way you are slowly building their relationship. I can't wait to see how you'll continue it.
Holding On To Heart
2008-10-19 . chapter 3
this is quite good and its about my favorite hp couple :) please continue
13-lucky-charms
2008-10-14 . chapter 3
"After-class activities" huh? xD Why do I have a feeling it involves 5 dolla and sucky sucky.

I can't wait till the next chapter, this is getting good :D
obaketenshi
2008-10-07 . chapter 2
This is quite sweet, I'd like to see more :)
Miss3y
2007-10-30 . chapter 1
Aww it was cute =} A little fluffy, and I love your Ariana. I can't wait for an update.
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