it was a nice story -i think its cute how vinnie and doogie howser love each other and try to take care of each other! - nice story LOL! the authors note in the middle of the story was ok i guess .

It may not have been the best but it's one of the best stories I've read

I agree with the other reviewer. Author's notes in the middle of the story are a bad idea. But the story itself was good. I enjoyed it.

The authors notes in the middle were a little... much... but it was good :D

You were very in-character, and it was a good story. You also had a couple spelling mistakes and all that, but those are completely understandable because... everyone makes mistakes and when we type we can easily pass them off as typos.