It's really good so far.

Kurama: Z
lol, I kid, I kid. though he did probally sleep, along with Kuwabara and Yusuke, I have a feeling those 2 could sleep through the end of the world.

yay, an ice fox is on it's way ^^ invite me to the baby shower will ya, lol ^^

Plans ... Plans are good *returns evil grin*

So is Touya a demon traitor because of leaving the shinobi for Kurama? (I suppose they call Kurama a traitor during the DT too, don't they?) Hm... Well, so long as the one fellow is still alive I sense much drama for the two of them.

uh oh, that Risho is a bastard, y didn't they kill him? when kurama had him tied up they could've done it in less then 2 secounds. I'm kinda annoyed that they didn't actually.

hmm...No offence, it was a decent beggining, but I doubt Kurama could do even that much with his wounds. Please remember that he has a bloody plant growing through his body!

Cool. Update soon

Hehe, I recognized Chapter 14 to be sure!

So my suspicions about Touya's feeling like crap were confirmed ... damn. On a different note, kudos for you for taking the bigger points of the big Yusuke vs. Toguro battle and condensing it into ne chapter--had to be hard to decide what to keep and what to discard and whta to change.

So now Touya's going to live in the Ningenkai for a while. Should be interesting!

I must admit, I do actually like Elder Toguro. He was funny in a very mordant sort of way in the actual show, and recently I've grown addicted to the series "Tales From Elder Toguro" on YouTube, hehe... Eh, but I digress.

STILL WANTING TO KNOW WHAT THE DEAL IS WITH TOUYA...

Combining the next four episodes possibly, then? It's been so long, I forget--just how many episodes was Yusuke's and Toguro's fight? With larger fights it's always at least two, and then when it's Yusuke in the equation it's often even longer than that...

Oh wow, you updated and I hadn't realized--Well, here's to supplementing/spurring your review count over here, eh?

It's been so long since I've seen this episode, but oh yes, it had so many hilarious lines in there; we laughed so much toward the end where Hiei's exhausted and is glowering through half-lidded eyes XD

*stern* I *want* to know what happened with Touya--did he miscarry or what? And that triangle, well, I could see it. They are all elementals, in a way, and their personalities all do sort of complement each other...