Awsome-ness! There just aren't enough fics for this movie.
Gass next!

As much as Yumemi is the main character, a lot of time is spent on the backstories surrounding Ichiko and Suzume. The creators of Munto did a god job explaining just how dear and loyal they were to Yumemi and you did an exceptionally good job keeping them in character.

I liked how you looked at events from Munto 1 from Suzume's and Ichiko's point of view. I hope you write more fanfics!

Till next time,
Jackie

Oh I always wondered what had happened to her umbrella and how Ichiko and Suzume reacted when Yumemi was talking to Munto! You did a fabulous job filling that void in, I feel like that's exactly what happened. I especially love your ending sentence, very powerful.

Omgeez, the last line was so powerful; I loved it! Write more!