no updates anymore? would love to read the whole story. amazing work ;-)

Hope you to update it soon.

I agree, Sallys Song by Amy Lee ist great and really suits your Alice. Theres a wonderful Alice/ Uncas video with this song on Youtube.

Hopocan is secretly rooting for team Alice/Uncas methinks :P What a brave girl to go in there like that! xD

This: "As always, it was her innocence that undid him so thoroughly." made me sigh like a schoolgirl. WONDERFUL line!

GAH you build me up and then break me back down so quickly! (luckily thought, I know the end HEHE)

Look forward to reading more :)

"The best methods for preserving beans are salting, pickling, drying. Descriptions to follow in the next few days...Walnut sap is good for sprains...I will ask his brother to take me to see him."

I loved that bit! hehe just fabulous.

Nawwwwww, I'm right with the girls, Annabel and James' story is just so cute and romantic!

Oh Nathaniel, you doth throw the metaphorical spanner in the works!

One more chapter tonight I think...

Hahaha if I were Alice I would be excited about making soap too (slightly disgusted, but excited all the same :P)

Ahhhhhhh Tankawun...do I smell trouble there or do I smell trouble ;)

Ahhhhhhh Nathaniel, playing the matchmaker...you naughty boy! hehe :P

I love the brotherly vibe you've created between Uncas and Nathaniel, it's really well done :)

NEEEEEEEEXXXTTTT!

*Squee* I love James already! (Annabel too) XD

Hahahaha Chingachgook sees all... ;) Silly boy Uncas, thinking daddy won't see what you're thinking about...I don't know how, but parents just KNOW things :P

I'm baaaaaaaaaaaack! ;)

Nawwww lovely little bit of brotherly advice between Nathaniel and Uncas there ;)

Ohhhh the pining! Poor Alice! Poor Uncas! Just GAH

I listened to the song, Love Amy Lee, she has the most amazing voice. Also love the fact that you went into the history of the Lenape. I love it when an author actually bothers to go into research and/or historical detail - shows how much they are devoted to the story. (As you can see, a lot of love here :P)

Onwards I go...

I think CeffylGwyn has a great idea in reviewing each chapter of this wonderful wonderful story. With much regret I have to
admit this is out of my ability because english ist not my 1st language. Time and curiosity learnt me to understand much
better than to express myself. But assiage, I am a great great fan of your story and i hope once you will go forward with ist.
Till now I want to thank you for one of the best Uncas/ Alice stories ever. This brought a lot of joy to me and I can imagine every person very lively. Thank you for sharing !

Poor Alice. I really do feel for her...Everyone always thinking that she's this airy-fairy little shrimp with nothing between the ears...jeeeez people, SHALLOW MUCH? :P

You know, that's the only substantial thing I have never liked about Indian movies - showing when they scalped someone (especially when they were alive) see Dances with Wolves, case and point...blegh.

Chapters Onwards (tomorrow) as I am currently pooped...aaaaaaand it's almost midnight...on a Sunday, and there is a high possibility of me waking up early tomorrow (unfortunately).

Great Chapter! Can't wait to read more! :)

Dun Dun Dun!

Oh those bad Frenchies! Uncas, go poke your huge gun in their direction...that'll scare them off... (lol just realised how bad that sounded - PG people! PG! :P)

You gave me shivers with "He slowly unwounded himself from his position, his movement slow and languorous, but with the air of a snake about to strike. He was in his element. A hunter." *Happy Daydream sigh* Ohhhhh boooyyyyy...

Just randomly, did you know there was an *ahem* love scene between Alice and Uncas (actually just after the point in which your profile picture is taken) that was in the script, was filmed, and wasn't put in the movie? (Even Eric Schwieg who played Uncas was annoyed they didn't put that scene in) Someone should really get them to make an extended edition of that movie, maybe as a 21st anniversary present or something :P

"Nathaniel knew that more than three glances at a woman meant Uncas was infatuated" Love that line :P

It's fabulous how you've maintained everyone's characters in this - I can see everything as it happens. It's wonderful :)

Oh the proverbial cliffhanger! Le gasp! Whatever could happen next? ;) Hehe

p.s. Guess what - I found time ;)

A couple of things here. Where are you getting these translations from?! I love it when people actually use the language that the person is speaking (yes I'm totally biased I do it :p but I appeciate it when other people do too)
Hmmmm I was just thinking (lol I just rewatched LotM the other day so it's still fresh in my mind) that Jhodi May who played Alice has brown eyes not blue...are you going from book references then? (Although if you were there's a whole lot of thing the movie goes weird

Ahem. I just finished reading your story (in its entirety) and experienced a number of emotions.
The first was euphoria, that I had found an absolutely BRILLIANT Last of the Mohicans story for my poor little self who had wished a different end to the movie.
The second was admiration, for both you and your beta, that you worked together so well to create such a masterpiece (really very well done btw).
The third...was despair, that you had not updated in almost two years.
The fourth was (and still is) trepidation that you had/have forgotten this story or are unable to finish it.

So.
I have decided that in an attempt to get you to write/post the next chapter, I shall review every chapter (If that's any sort of bribe...), as well as favourite it and brag about it to any of my mates on here ( in order for them to read this story and recommend it) *Cue big cheesy grin*

Deal or No Deal?

Review:

I love the scene that she had here with Uncas, you characterise them both perfectly! Hahah 'lust for a savage man', woman, who wouldn't? Just LOOK at him! :P

Great Chapter! Can't wait for more! :)

Please update!