Oh, wow, you finished it! Congrats on that. The story turned out to be shorter than I expected but I think it wrapped up nicely^^

Good story can't wait for the next lol!

Cute story. Very kewl. =)

A story I'm working on involves a materia that may bring Aerith, or anyone back from the promised land. DUN DUN DUN

This story is very cute. It was a little short, though...

-LunaticNinja

I like it so far can't wait for next chappy! Can't kill Cloud =O
Nd a revive materia is actually a good idea lol great plot!

I see you continued the story, which is great. You also developed it more and described the fight scene. Right now, the story is reading like a play which can get a little confusing sometimes since the reader can get lost without the help of a name. Also, give their messages a little more feeling so we can really get into the story. Thanks for updating, maybe now you'll get more reviews.

Interesting storyline. I don't think anyone has ever written an aeris resurrection fic involving the use of a materia(and if I'm wrong, sorry to those who have) so kudos to you.

I noticed that you don't write in paragraph form, which isn't necessarily bad, just different. I'm assuming that you are going to continue this fic in this format so all the chapters are going to be short. I dunno if this type of format is the best option for your type of story b/c it seems like an adventure/romance fic. If I am not mistaken, Cloud is going on a delivery so you need to describe the settings and actions a bit more in later chprs.

Over all, you are up to a good start and I look forward to new chaptrs. Although, I must add that personally, I don't think you should update stories just because of the reviews or lack thereof. People cannot judge a story from just the 1st chap and most of the times, as a story gets longer, reviews star piling up.

Best of luck!

Well, you asked me to review, so I review.
Here's what I think:

put all that author's note stuff at the bottom or condense it to a few sentences. The way it is currently is a little distracting and I found it difficutl to figure out where the story began. You don't need to fix it in this, but keep in mind for future posts.

Second: you've got an interesting plot line opening here, but I think it went a little fast. However, I do think you can make this into a multichapter fic with ease.
my ideas concerning this were a: summoning Aerith from the dead summons Sephiroth, thus, what will Aerith do once she is alive again? Will she remember what happened in the life stream? What about Sephiroth? will he be sane again or is he still mad as a hatter? Who made that special materia? How did it get mastered without ever being used? If someone has been using it to master it, who else did they resurrect? What mess with that cause? Why does Rude have this materia and why is Shinra intrusting Cloud with this? Are they _betting_ that he'll use it to revive Aerith? if so, and they fully expect Sephiroth to be revived as well, how does Rufus plan on controling Sephiroth? Rufus would never bring Sephiroth back without some way to control him.

third: I think the story could use a little more description. Yeah, anyone familiar with FF7 would know what you're talking about when you say "the Monument to Zack" but what's the weather look like? Weather - wind, rain, sunshine, that can really set a mood. Also, have the characters interact with the scenery more. Have Cloud play with his 9th glass of beer. Have Tifa wiping down the bar a short distance away. Mention the slowly spinning ceiling fan that had a slight wobble. Set the scene - dive into it so we can see everything that's in your head!

in short - I think this plotline has potential, but does need a little work.
good job.

hehehe.. i totally agree with you. without reviews.. chapters do come out rather slowly.. hehehe..

Nice chapter there. Pls continue ya?