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| Issac Blast 2008-07-08 ch 18,  | abusethis does not deserve to be called a story. to me it seems more like an outline for a series. honestly, i think you should take this and expand it, elaborate on it. split it up into blocks by stopping at the time skips. im sure its within your ability and unless you screwup severly, i think it will come out wonderfully |
| NaruHinaforever 2008-05-26 ch 18, | abusenice chapter |
| ChibiSasukekun 2008-05-20 ch 12, | abusei a little less confused good job the darkness that has surronded me is slowly lifting hey who shut off the nightlight Orchimaru get back here with my Sasuke nightlight you child molester |
| ChibiSasukekun 2008-05-20 ch 11, | abuseI thought they were on there way to a castle to train what the F* is going on im so confused why arent the drugs working I mean why arent the chapters continuing were you left off help |
| ChibiSasukekun 2008-05-20 ch 10, | abuseOkay i like were the story is going but your loesing me and confusing the hell out of me with your writing style and that saying something good job im completly lost but its such a good story onwards and upwards or downwards I go Um Im lost where am I |
| Rose Tiger 2008-05-20 ch 4, | abuseIt spelled Bastards. Good story so far. |
| ChibiSasukekun 2008-05-19 ch 1, | abuseintresting that you actualy pulled of POV fic writing thats cool very few writers that ive read can do that i have in the past and it turns out good but props to you becuase you make it work well you no what they say practice makes perfect or something like that oh wait i rambling *_*0 sweat drop |
| JamesRKS 2008-05-18 ch 18, | abuseIt wasn't bad, just a little short. but still good. sequel. CHA! |
| Miss J Manga 2008-05-18 ch 18, | abuseAww! Cute. The perfect ending! |
| SGTWWIIFREAK 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abusegood job |
| SGTWWIIFREAK 2008-04-30 ch 13, | abuseI would like to apoligize for my rudness in my last comment...and for this one. KIBA WOULDNT DO THAT! (naruhina for life) |
| SGTWWIIFREAK 2008-04-30 ch 12, | abuseI WILL KILL YOU FOR MAKING NARUTO SLAP HINATA YOU (censored)! |
| RaiderXV 2008-04-21 ch 17, | abuseOk keep up the good work, I am looking forward to another chapters. Good job... |
| life.is.love.love.is.life. 2008-04-21 ch 17, | abuseok first of all NO! I JUST FOUND THIS STORY AND NOW ITS ALMOST OVER! and secondly awesome story please do a sequel! oh yeah and update soon. |
| JamesRKS 2008-04-21 ch 17, | abuseaw, Why¿? i like the story. |