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| Kara-El 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseSweet... and a lot of fun -- easy to visualize. Fluffy, but in-character K:) |
| conan98002 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abusehe does stop listening when she is in the bathroom though right? |
| enchantedsleeper 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! I finally watched the SR film yesterday and I'm going through a huge phase of Superman fanfiction, as well as Smallville since I'm also watching that series on TV. Have you ever read the fanfic Searching for Clark Kent? It's great, I've spent most of today reading it... |
| Trekkie6 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abuse{the sea of red brake lights seemed to go on forever. “Crap!” Of course, this always happened when she was late for work.} lol Doesn't it for everybody? {Not if they wanted his secret identity to remain a secret} Or an identity for that matter, although, now that I think about it, 'Clark' would be the identity to disappear cuz he'd just be called Superman wherever he went... {She snatched up the phone and looked out of the windows. As far as she could see, nothing had changed at all… so why all the racket?} Something she doesn't she? {And mostly because a tall mocha cappuccino, still hot, had been waiting on her desk when she arrived at the Planet} Aw! And there I go again... {“Looks like it’s another vending-machine sandwich for you, Lane,”} Sounds kinda good right about now... {It was amazing how just the thought of him dampened the day-to-day irritations in her life.} Ain't love grand? {Of course, he wasn’t here now, and no way in hell was she going to ask him to swoop in and rescue her from walking.} LOL OOH! Hotdogs! {“Gotta call from Mr. Kent. He asked me t’make you a couple with the works.”} *squees and kicks her legs in a shippy fit* How can you not love that?! {a bar of chocolate sat beside her computer keyboard.} To bad it wasn't a Snickers... {Lois leaned back in her chair, propping her aching feet on the edge of her desk.} He should come by and rub them for her. {“What is it this time? You’re going to make me fat, you realize that,”} lol Like he'd care. Slippers?! He brought her slippers?! I wanna marry him...I swear if he asked me right this second I would say yes. Forget my boyfriend... {“Oh, I’m not trying to get out of anything} Not yet anyway. *evil grin* Definitely endearing. She was totally taken care of. Lucky woman...I wanna be Lois Lane for a day! Or a couple of hours at least... This was really sweet. Sweet and fluffy and I'm swooning! |
| Makokam 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abuseVery nice little story. I'd imagine that Clark would have to be mroe than just listening out for her, though, to know where she was to order some hotdogs for her from a street vendor. |
| Perfect Soldier 01 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseYay for fluffy-ness! :D As always, I really liked it. It made my day feel a bit better :) ~Perfect Soldier 01 |
| Reena Lin 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseWOW, Clark is so sweet in this story! I LOVE him being so considerate and thoughtful around Lois. I LOVE this one-shot! It's amazing! Thank you! : ) |
| mitzi67 2007-10-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved it. Please continue with your great start with this supes/fic. Richard m could be in London or some european city. He is afterall the editor to the London office as it was mentioned in the film.?..Maybe he meets Chloe,Cat Grant,Katherine Kowolski,or Eve Tessmacher. Eve Tessmacher (Superman The Movie) she always wanted to get it on with a good guy. Lois and Clark still have things to hash out. Does perry know? Jimmy? Don't keep us waiting too long. |
| CamFan4Ever 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseAww... Sweet fic. Loved it. |
| Georgia Kennedy 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuse"Of course, this always happened when she was late for work." How true, LOL. “Gotta call from Mr. Kent. He asked me t’make you a couple with the works.” Does Clark read minds too, or does he just get around really fast? By way of what I hope is a helpful suggestion, in between the lines [“Hey, Susan, this is Lois Lane, can you put me through to Perry?”] and [“Perry White,” her editor-in-chief answered in a brusque tone.], you need some sort of transition. Something like, "the line went silent, but came back to life a few seconds later." Another fine job! GK |
| Rhea Jediknight 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseYeah! I get to be the first review! This is a sign that I really should be going to work and not reading this, but when I saw that there was a new story by you I just had to stop and read it. Great moment in their life. I liked how thoughtful Clark was, I hope he doesn't listen in on every minute. I would hate to think of him listening to her while she was in the restroom or something . . . but we know that people in fictional universes never have to take care of stuff like that right? Great story; just what I needed this morning. Rhea |