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| The Little Corinthian 2007-11-20 ch 1,  | abuseHe would, too :0P That was sweet (and there's nothing wrong with a little fluff now and then). Nice job! |
| marialisa 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseLovely. Sweet and fluffy. Just what I needed to read :) |
| chili-peppers 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! This is brilliant! I love fluff! My fave line- "If she doesn’t, well, he’ll just have to pester her everyday until she grows so sick of him asking, she marry him anyway".- Lol I just imgine Danny thinking that. Great job |
| Mariekjj 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseAww, that was really cute! The ending made me laugh xD -Maybe he’ll ask her one day. Hopefully she’ll say yes. If she doesn’t, well, he’ll just have to pester her everyday until she gorws so sick of him asking, she marry him anyway.- Haha, stupid Danny, of course she'll say yes :) Great job! |
| nikki.02 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseAnother fantastic fic! "Reaching over her shoulder, he clasps her left hand, which she tucks under her chin, with his. With his thumb, he gently rubs the knuckle of her fourth finger in circle. He trails gentle kisses on her shoulder before he buries his forehead against her temple and sighs." Such descriptive writing! (: "Maybe he’ll ask her one day. Hopefully she’ll say yes. If she doesn’t, well, he’ll just have to pester her everyday until she grows so sick of him asking, she marry him anyway." Haha! Perfect sweet and funny ending! |
| A.Boleyn 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseWow, what a great way to start my morning! :) I personally LOVE sap/fluff/cheese (whichever you call it) and I think you did this perfectly - it wasn't overdone, but I got total warm fuzzies. I like the reflective quality of the piece, how even though Lindsay is asleep, she has such a strong physical presence. The last line was hilarious - so typically Danny, reminding us that although he is head over heels, he hasn't lost that spunk. Thanks for a great pick-me-up! :) |
| scoob2222 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseaw I love your Danny voice, its so perfect |
| Shortcake82 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sweet. |
| JennCorinthos 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseIf she doesn’t, well, he’ll just have to pester her everyday until she gorws so sick of him asking, she marry him anyway. This is so Danny... Love reading Danny musings... Great short... Jennifer |
| prplerayne 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseOh wow. That's so cheesy and sappy and sweet!! Sometimes...like this...you just can't have enough cheese! Great job!! Danny Messer thinking about proposing...I wonder what it'd be like? |
| TatianaMik 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseI love it. It was so cute! |
| Isanoot 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abusewow, wonderful, I need it, after our no-DL last episode... very nice work, thanks for sharing it |
| Camilla- too lazy to sign i... 2007-10-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseVERY cheesy, as promised, but i think the last line saved it. great fic, and definitely needed after the lack of DL so far this season! |