Again that was just excellent. I loved the symbolism of all the fairy tale and mythical characters. I have a feeling that no one is safe in your world. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the others of CSI:NY.

Wow. Have long read your witty posts on Talk CSI and thought you talented with words, but I was not prepared for this. Your imagery is staggering, and I'm so glad I read this.

This was really, really descriptive and I'm glad someone finally decided to write a fic on Lindsay.
The whole thing with her past and the diner shooting seems very believeable and even though it's not DL, I really enjoyed this!

Wow, I wish I knew how to respond appropriately. Your imagery is amazing - unexpected, clear and frighteningly haunting.

I loved the contrast of "Opposite world". And you attention to detail; I felt painfully sad for 4-yr old Lindsay, and cried with the teenager that saw her friends slaughtered.

While I can skip over worsd with many fics, I found that I had to (and wanted to) carefully read each of yours, allowing it time to settle and take shape.

An experience of amazing writing.

Excellent and creepy - very haunting images. Especially loved the banter between Flack and Stella, and the contrast with Lindsay's imaginings of his fate.

Ah... really only one word for this. Excellent!

This has to be the definitive piece on the effect that Lindsay's past has had on her. The imagery was darkly beautiful and stirring. I loved every word.

It isn't often that a piece of fan fiction has me thinking about it for longer than a few minutes, but this has been nagging at me constantly since you posted it yesterday. In case you're wondering I mean that as a compliment; your writing (as always) invokes powerful images and emotions in the reader. I'm sure it leaves some feeling uncomfortable, but I suspect that was your objective with this piece. If it is, you have succeeded admirably.

I can only liken reading this fic to a sensation; that of gliding inexorably towards an end point, just as Lindsay is being pulled towards her fate. Her development from a child with an innocent love of Halloween, through terror and onto an acceptance of her fate was gripping.

Good luck with the competition; you deserve to do well.

I would just like to let you know how much I have enjoyed reading this story! Your descriptions are beyond amazing and some are downright macabre! I found them truly horror novel-esque. I'd like to quote my favorite parts but I would just be copying the whole thing!

Good luck in the challenge you definately deserve to win - horrifically done! (that means it was fan-effin-tastic!)