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Brendan Rizzo 9/6/08 . chapter 1
And God punishes them anyway...
Sunuxal 4/7/08 . chapter 1
Hi!

I like this one, too.

Divine writers Block...! lol

And I like your exegeses why grass can only produce a single note and why the snake has to shed its skin. Great dialog!

Bye,

Sunuxal
Finn Mac Cool 8/31/01 . chapter 1
I like this approach to the story. You'll probably get a lot of flames from Bible purists, but you should have known that coming in. I think a sequel or another chapter is in order.
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