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Reviews For: A Little Red Forked Tongue

aprilfool1993
2008-09-06
ch 1,
abuseAnd God punishes them anyway...
Sunuxal
2008-04-07
ch 1,
abuseHi!

I like this one, too.

Divine writers Block...! lol

And I like your exegeses why grass can only produce a single note and why the snake has to shed its skin. Great dialog!

Bye,
Sunuxal
Finn Mac Cool
2001-08-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like this approach to the story. You'll probably get a lot of flames from Bible purists, but you should have known that coming in. I think a sequel or another chapter is in order.
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