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| vaoni 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseI really like this!! Good work |
| Lionhearted Girl 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseVery good, I iked it. The only thing wrong with it is that Eve wasn't a prophet ess so theres no way anyone would have known that would happen. |
| Sunuxal 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseHi! I like your story very much. :-) First because of your writing style (Yeah! Someone who has remembered that this here is a FanFICTION-Board – yes, in the bible-section, too) and second because I like stories with a shifted point of view: It challenges people to think about your and then the original message. In your story it seems clear to me, that Gods acting was cruel and merciless. Now – when there is some pity for Cain and one has lost the typical, simple classification in good and bad – one can start to think how Gods acting was in the original story... Bye, Sunuxal |
| Rose Cotton 2003-03-31 ch 1, | abuseThis is an awesome description of what it might have been like for Cain. You give the reader so much sympathy for him. I love stories that dramatize Bible stories without really losing the original message (or going into ground that could be considered blasphemous). Have you ever read *The Book of God*? It's really good. Your story reminded me of it. Anyway, great job! :-) |
| Lassiter 2001-08-31 ch 1, | abuse*boggle* good! wow. last part was very touching. |
| Finn Mac Cool 2001-08-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's nice to hear the story from Cain's perspective, though not condoning his actions. |