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dramil
2008-07-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseAWSOME< AND YES THEY ALL WOULD CARE!!
trixxx
2007-11-16
ch 1, anon.
abusehaha, this is ace. Though I'm with Alfred overall; where I am here in england, football is indeed played with feet :) despite not knowing the first thing abot american football I still managed to enjoy it, well done.

I love this part:

'Joker caught Two-Face’s attention, pointed at his eyes, and then back at the screen.

“It’s not because you watched it!” Harvey shouted back.'
jarec
2007-11-14
ch 1,
abuseEh, afraid its not to be. Canadiens couldn't win the Stanley Cup if their lives depended on it anymore...
Great story, the characters personalities were consistent with canon, and its always nice to see homicidal maniacs in a relaxed setting.
Also the Joker is Awesomeness incarnate.
Sno-Chan
2007-11-02
ch 1,
abuseThis was a living PAIN to beta, but I just want you to know that I still think it's adorable and I found myself giggling while re-reading certain portions. The flow was very appropriate and to the point as well. Love ya!
Queen Ghidorah
2007-10-31
ch 1,
abuseGo Gotham!

Ah, competition is never so good as when you're dealing with psychos -- they take it to a whole new level! And, of course, you did a fine job with them.

I completely concur with Batman being called Batman; whenever he's called anything else, I always mutter 'Batman' beneath my breath anyway. It just feels *right*.
Kimberly
2007-10-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh wow, I forgot how stressful watching football could be. Especially when you *care* about the teams playing. Of course, I was cheering for Metropolis ^_^ The Joker was absolutely hilarious! He gave me many, many, LOL moments. This was a very fun piece to read.
laal ratty
2007-10-30
ch 1,
abuseVery funny, though I loved this line the most, '“That is where you are mistaken. Where I come from, football is actually played with your feet,” he lectured. “And the world cup is something much more worthy of all this excitement.”' Brilliant piece.
Rumielf
2007-10-30
ch 1,
abuseComing from someone who really doesn't care for football (5 years of marching band I still can't follow a game) and prefers professional wrestling and baseball...

I cracked up. This is hilarious and definitely perfect to break up the work I'm doing. :)

Can you imagine them all playing Halo on xbox live?
Capito Celcior
2007-10-30
ch 1,
abuseAw yeah.

I myself do NOT watch sport. And yes, Football to me is soccer to you. I live in Belgium. We have "Voetbal" which means, you guessed it, football (voet = foot, and bal = ball...pretty obvious). The Netherlands, they have that as well. Fussbal for Germany (Fuss = foot) England, well you knew Alfred. The whole world has Football, none have soccer. So it confused me at first in the States when I heard of Football yet did not see the netted goals, and instead of the shirt-and-short wearing players saw some hulking dudes with helmets...

Still, I can apreciate the humor of sportsrivalry. So I say, if this is the worst you can come up with, don't hide your bad ideas. It's good. It's good, It SCORES! (Soccer reference. though it would be more obvious with GOAL! at the end)
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