 Hard and Horny Nude InuYasha 6/30/09 . chapter 11YAY!So sweet!Sasuke is so sweet in this.l reay liked it.The one thing you kinda messed up on was you said Sakura was expeled for a month expeled is kicked out you should have said suspended.Ok me just had to be hones in my review other than that it was perfect.l am gona go look for the sequal.
Hard and Horny Nude InuYasha(CB hehe) |
 rex rhoten critic 3/23/09 . chapter 11 This is a very good story, I thought it was sweet the way it captured the emotions just right. The storyline was genius, although it could have used a bit more romance in a sense of making love. The beginning was a bit sad but, it was good that way cause it made the story sweeter when Naruto finds Sasuke. I'll be looking forward to reading another story from this author soon. If you like sweet emotional stories I suggest you read this one, it is very touching.
Critic,
Rex A Rhoten Jr. |
 x-ClinicallyInsane-x 1/2/09 . chapter 11It's a really good story, but I feel that you ended it too soon |
 The Yaoi Pimpette 3/16/08 . chapter 11Awesome fic! XD It was so cute! I'm happy sakura left them alone at last. Man I don't like that girl... *shudder* I feel bad Iruka died, but I guess you can't have a good fic with out drama. ; Poor umbrella every one is so mean to the poor thing. The Africa lion thing wasn't offending or anything. (Is from there) At lest you didn't make it look like Africa is one big place where every does nothing but eat lions and live in huts lol. Xp The promise ring thing was such a great way to end the fic! I was like "aww that's too cute!". Well thanks for writing another great fic! . |
 xFang's Angelx 12/29/07 . chapter 11Please update soon! |
 kitty-cat-666 12/27/07 . chapter 11aw...what a sweet ending! |
 kittycat 900 12/26/07 . chapter 11 Wait how old are naruto and sasuke if your going to do a lemon? |
 Kittendragon 12/25/07 . chapter 11Well...that was abrupt. Nice Sweeney reference. |
 XxXFading-With-TimeXxX 12/25/07 . chapter 11lol alex sanchez. that was so good! i loves it so so much! |
 tsukimochiusagi 12/25/07 . chapter 11 aw its almost like marriage. so cute! |
 Panda Luver 4 Life 12/25/07 . chapter 11-claps- That was manifeicent! Bravo! |
 Inyx Dawn 12/25/07 . chapter 11Another great chapter! How was Sweeny Todd? |
 xFang's Angelx 12/24/07 . chapter 10Please update soon! |
 SHANTI SYNDROME 12/24/07 . chapter 10After all this, if I was Naruto, I would have kicked Sasuke's butt! xD
Good chappy! |
 mochiusagi 12/22/07 . chapter 10aw why did you have to make Iruka die? what is happening to naruto and sasuke? please update soon! |