Whee! I love this story :D Haha, Demyx.

I really like Olette paired with anyone (not Roxas, though!! :D *shakes fist*)

Gah, I love Namine, and how you made Hayner's personality C:

I got a little creeped out at the end, though. Namine must be frightened :O

Favorite

.wow.~
.im lovng it.~
.i think that olette was such an amazing character.~(even if she did have a small part in kh2)
.hm.~im gonna assume that riku is the angel,and roxas is the friend (since it did mention it in the summary~lawl xD)
.anyways.~please try to update soon.^-^.
.i really liked it. :D

I like it alot. Update soon!

whahn! Update!

Roxas is Raoul? Seriously? -_-
Grr.
That was good. Although I kind of feel like I'm reading Phantom but with KH characters instead of the PotO characters. I know that's probably your point to the story, but it's difficult to picture these characters in the story with this storyline when they're saying the exact same thing the actual PotO people say.

Did you get that? 'cause I doubt that made any sense.
okay.
bye.
kayleigh (airica adriene)

oh man oh man OH MAN
no rikette or (verylittle) roxette in this onee ) :

but the next chapter..
i simply can't wait.

i hope its here asap !

Okay, time for some tough love. Your story is progressing quite nicely, but I'm afraid it's time to bust out our old friend the Grammar Hammer. (SUPER-SPECIAL AWESOME GRAMMAR HAMMER THEME MUSIC GO!)

"However, her boyfriend, Marluxia, *had been casted* as the main male role." --"Casted" is not a word. The past tense and participle is "cast".

"A knock raped at her door"--The past tense of "rap" is "rapped"; you used the past tense of "rape." (=8O HOLY RAPING DOORKNOBS, BATMAN!) XD

"...he the unseen genius”" --Missing a period here, but that's typography, at which I also suck. So I honestly shouldn't be talking.

“Angel of music, guide and guardian brought to me your glory. Angel of music, I knew longer, secret and strange angel,” --Did you get these lyrics off a site and paste them in? THIS IS GRAMMAR RAPE. GRAMMAR RAPE IS A CRIME. =8O

"His mouth with agape..." --What is this "agape" that was in Roxy's mouth? Caviar? (*mental image of Roxas jaw-dropping and dribbling caviar all over his tux* LAWL.) I'm assuming you meant "was agape."

"What a change, you’re really not a bit the gawk-ish that once you were." --I think this is just me not remembering the lyrics. But...gawkish? 0_0 (BTW, it isn't hyphenated.)

I know you were sick (I MISSED YOU IN JOURNALISM TODAY. D: D: D:), but you can do much better, girl! If you need me to beta for you and do all the Grammar Hammering beforehand, I'd be more than happy. And you know I'm only saying this because I love you like a pie crust filled with whipped cream.

OH AND I HAVE A WICKED MAGNET IN MY LOCKER NOW. IT'S GREEN. :D SO RENJI HAS SOME NEW FRIENDS. PLEASE COME BACK TO SCHOOL. I MISS YOU.

Stoopid virius.

Anyways...! I loved it! :D Kinda just like the movie but it's really, really well written out! Looking forward for more.

- muffin

oh the suspence love it, I wonder whos that boy on the balcony

zomg ashfkljkdhaiuh Loren.
Phantom of the Opera.
ily.
Very good.
♥kayleigh.

:D

:D

RIKU WILL BE THE SEXIEST PHANTOM IN THE HISTORY OF PHANTOMS.

YEAH! I LOVED THE MOVIE! AND FINALLY! I'VE WAITED ... srry, I've waited for a Phantom of the Opera-Themed fic for awhile!

A bunch of Chocolate Chip Cookies for you!!


Please continue, I'd love to continue reading this!

Sum-Chan

dude,


MOREMOREMOREMORE.

i want some smexy action hur. :]

Ah. This is love. ;D

Think of Me is an absolute marvelous song and this is a marvelous start for a ficceh! I am lost for words, Loren. :D

Just: HOMGEE. Can't believe it's based off of PoTO. I lurve that so much. And I'm familiar with the songs. [well, durrh. what part of i'm playing carlotta don't you understand? lol. jk.]

with love -
muffin