it was well written, but i didn't care much for the second chapter

if ms tendo did not died the what changes happened to nabiki and kasumi? i know you said you like ranma and akane match up but i think you should at least explore one for each of the tendo grils since there mother is a live that would radicly change how things are. kasumi would pruobly become a nusre for dr.tuff. naiki on the other hand would realy change, what if she contunie in the art?

just some thing to think about hope you keep wrighting

Is Ranma gonna be a girl as a student, since he's a water magnet and the hiding magic from the population?
plz plz plz update soon ^_^

Glad to see you did what the readers wanted and made this in to a series btw you're Negima/Ranma crossover challenge has already been accepted the fanfic is called "Shin Kuroi Tsubasa" by Aki Iokua and it's ann RxA Nagima/Ranma crossover just like you wanted. Hope to see more chapters from you soon.

pretty decent. dont know much about negima, but the fic is decent so far. this chap felt a little bit rushed though.

Still a good story. There is only one thing I hate about this story and that is the Ranma akane pairing. No offense but in my opinion if people do crossover stories they should have crossover pairings.

Yay, you continued it! Hooray for family reunions! Hm, can Negi do anything about Jusenkyo? Maybe at least give Ranma control over when he changes so he doesn't feel helpless and can do things without worrying about being a water magnet?

heh, Is Ranma gonna be a new Mahora student? ^_^
plz plz plz update soon ^-^

Interesting. It's not to bad, though I am kind of curious as to what would happen next. Obviously, there would be no more engagements, but what about the challenges, and such. would he still go to furinkan, or would he go elsewhere, possibly even Mahora with his curse? anyway, good story, keep up the good work.

this is a good story and would be even better as a series instead of a one-shot, and I'm hoping you will update and complete dark elf and the wild horse

Those (American) cops know Japans?
Everyone of them?

Genma NOT using the Umi- and Yami-Sen-Ken?
Ranma not helping his pops?
Remember, atleast TEN years of brainwashing, and this is without any pressure points to protect family ect.

Miss Tendo knowing of the curse, it quite tight/close for her leaving time.
If I was her, I would have left the moment I got the postcard with the mail.

Johnathon knowing about Jusenkyo, BIG ERROR, magic is myth stuff.
Knowledge of magic is hard to get because of that.
So, he shouldn't know anything about that.

Ryo Kumon used Ranma's name during his Umi-Sen-Ken quest, would show up on police reports, ect.

All in all, it seemed a bit rusted to me.
But for some reason I was thinking about Naru from Sailor Moon after I had read this fic part.
Would explain why she gets targeted by Youma's and the like. LOL

Nice. It'd be cool if there was a one-shot sequel detailing Ranma's meeting with Haruna (one of my favorite Negima characters).

If you're keeping this a one-shot I'd be a shame this story has loads of potential seeing as how a loot of the foundation for the series has been changed. If you can please try to continue this I'd love to read more about this type of universe.

Not bad, a weird mix, but you did a good job.

yay! best new story/subject in a long time, hope you continue it. thanks!