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| Kelsey-chan 2008-06-05 ch 1, | abuseIt's a fantastic start; it defintely needs to be continued if it hasn't been. Kudos to you! =D |
| walkslikerain926 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abuseI like it, just, i was a bit short, but i cant wait for the next chapter. |
| Sakya 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseHi, Congratulations on your first effort on writing a fanfic. Your prologue, although VERY short, it´s nicely done and shows promise of a good read. I do recomend longer chapters as it captivates your readers more than short ones and promotes more reviews and pleads for updates. I hope to read more on it soon. |
| panther73110 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abusegreat story, is Damien harry and are james and lily still alive, and if they are do they have anymore kids? |