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Reviews For: Mein Sohn

Kelsey-chan
2008-06-05
ch 1,
abuseIt's a fantastic start; it defintely needs to be continued if it hasn't been. Kudos to you! =D
walkslikerain926
2007-11-05
ch 1,
abuseI like it, just, i was a bit short, but i cant wait for the next chapter.
Sakya
2007-10-30
ch 1,
abuseHi,

Congratulations on your first effort on writing a fanfic.

Your prologue, although VERY short, it´s nicely done and shows promise of a good read.

I do recomend longer chapters as it captivates your readers more than short ones and promotes more reviews and pleads for updates.

I hope to read more on it soon.
panther73110
2007-10-30
ch 1,
abusegreat story, is Damien harry and are james and lily still alive, and if they are do they have anymore kids?
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