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| evilteddybear 2008-05-17 ch 1,  | abuseThank you for your time and effort! I'm very impressed by the...diction(?) of your drabble/fic. Generally when expressing only ideas and emotions without action authors tend to present their drabbles in a disorganized stream of consciousness. The organized, simplistic, way you presented your/Kenshin's thoughts and emotions made it easy to compare the different sections so your point came across clearly. The rythm(?) of the words and sentences gives it an almost poetic air. Besides that I love how you captured this essence of Kenshin's character, stripping the complicated concepts down to their bare bones, so that it seems simple and easily understood, while still being profound. Thank you again! I'm sorry if my review was repetitive, I'm having trouble expressing myself. Have fun, and keep writing, you have talent!! |
| J Luc Pitard 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseThere it is in a nutshell. The entire arc of RK sums up nicely in your drabble. Nicely done. |
| kokoronagomu 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abusedrunken philosophy... surprisingly coherent. a pleasure, ginny |
| lmr666 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Moving. Just perfect. |
| Sakura Kaoru-Chan 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abusenice |
| ola 2007-10-31 ch 1, anon. | abusequite nice. i think the shortness of those 3 little bits make them that much more poignant. |
| rose 2007-10-31 ch 1, anon. | abusevery nice. great job. |
| sueb262 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseThis one raised the hairs on my arms as I read. Its tone is like the tolling of wisdom through the ages, and the particular examples are vivid and heart-breaking. I loved the structure: the three single summary sentences slice through the heart like a blade, and the final summation is powerful and True. Beautiful, beautiful work. |
| Fenikkusuken 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseNicely done. As always, concise and insightful. |
| Jou-ChanHimura 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseGood.. |
| WARG 2007-10-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseThese don't come along often, but i'm always very happy when they do. This is like unfolding one of those err layered albums(?) with writing on every fold, each one's nice and has its own little message, but when you're done unfolding you are also done with the story and it feels complete. This is Rk in folds.. very consice very complete. Great work. .. |
| The Wandering Pen 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseVery nice imagery and very succinct. It's hard to say so much with so few words, but you did it beautifully. Congrats! My only criticism is that it was Iori for whom Kenshin drew an unknown blade, not Eiji. It was in Eiji's cause that he broke the old, known sword. |
| Chi no Kaori 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseVery poignant. I'm not exaggerating when I say it took my breath away. ^^ I particularly like that bit about Chou - I was somewhat skeptical about the first point, but that line had me buying it. |
| misaoshiru 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is really amazing. I have no words. My only criticism is that the name is spelled "Eiji," not "Ieji." |
| Winter Sapphire 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseTouching. Moving, poignant, stirring, moving, emotive. There are a whole list of synonyms I could list, and not one of them could come close to how deeply this piece affected me. It was beautifully written and true to the series. As the old saying goes "short but sweet." Kudos. |