 Here's Your Cheese Omelette 2009-05-06 . chapter 1that was so(prolong the 'o') cute!
love it! |
 DarkDoves 2008-05-24 . chapter 1 AW that was so cute your a really good writer please write more kabaji/atobe stories THX ^.^ |
 Epitsu Onna 2008-04-02 . chapter 1Ann...
Kawaii, kawaii~
And love the Silver Pair part too XDD |
 Hiroro 2008-03-31 . chapter 1i liked the way where you made kaba-kun somewhat ooc (i...think.)
awesome fics you have! |
 speadee 2007-12-07 . chapter 1Good job showing their love and Captain Atobe's soft side! I like their taking turns in missing each other.
The whole team was IC too. It's typical of Shishido to be impatient and rude, and Ohtori to set him right. Ohtori acts more like a senior than Shishido. It's also like Oshitari to know so much. |
 Kobal 2007-11-04 . chapter 1"Of course. There isn't anyone to carry my bag for me. Right, Kabaji?" 'Actually, I wouldn't allow any other peasant to carry my bag for me.'
That was positivley brilliant. Maybe I'm just in one of those "everything-that-has-to-do-with-Atobe-is-great" moods, but your story was really cute. |