Girl this story was great i was hooked till the end Excellent Job Keep up the good work I look forward to reading the rest of your storyies they are the best I have read so far

PLEASE keept this story going. I've only seen a small amount of episodes of He-Man (thanks to a nephew who was a child in the 80's), but you had me absolutely riveted to my seat while I was reading this.

Absolutely wonderful! I have not read a story so well written or drawing in a long time. I admit I cried at current parts of the story. Wonderful!! You have talent.

Hi, just to let you know how much I have loved reading your stories they are written beautifully with all eliments needed to make an intresting and much loved story. Please continue with a follow up story as their is still so much that needs telling with Adam and Teelas relationship and im sure you will make it as entertaining as ever. many thanks

lovely,lovely,lovely!thank you so much!!

I just want to say that I loved this series! I like that Evil-Lyn and Skeletor really changed their ways. I would also be curious to see what villian would rise to cause trouble for our heroes: Count Marzo, King Hiss, or someone we'd least likely to suspect. ;-)

But whether you continue or not, I just wanted to say good work!

Wow!! I was on vacation last week, and I get the wonderful treat of coming home not only to more chapters, but this wonderful conclusion as well!

I do hope you continue to write more of your story. You are an exceptional writer, blending humor, romance, and action into one. (Plus, I want to see Skeletor again :)

So... thanks for your hard work and excellent storytelling. Thank you for sharing this great story!

Wow, this is my first time reading a He-Man story (arc) fiction, and I must say you did an awesome job on everything from characterizations to plot, bravo!

I must admit, I felt strange reading this, the reason being--my actual name is Teela. Yup, I am named after the character. My dad is a MOTU fan from the 80's and he and my mom decided to name me after her; and I must tell you it is a little weird to see your name in a story and hear it coming out of a animated mouth, even though it's not really me. O.o

But, enough of my jabbering. I really enjoyed this story. I hope you will write more He-Man fics in the future. I know I would greatly enjoy them, if you did.

But enough of my

Applause and thanks from me as well! I loved the letter from Skeletor. I would absolutely love for his newly redeemed/hcanged self to cotnact Adam sometime. Perhaps, even more so, i have always wanted to read a story in which there was nothing evil happening or lurking, simply regular and even happy (especially after everything that happened in your stoyr) times for our beloved characters. More on Adam and Teela's wedding/do they have children? Does , maybe finally, the Sorceress get to have some peace and rekindle a love interest with Duncan? ;)

Mona

Sheer perfection! BRAVO! You are an amazing writer. I loved the way you pulled everything together, and Skeletor's letter, LOL, it was bloody brilliant. I'm so inspired that I may try to write my own story now.

(Something that before this moment I've been too chicken to try.)

Thanks.

Bravo. Thank you for such an amazing story. The descriptions of the fight how you kept everyone up as to who had done what is really good. When you weave the characters and the relationships is a pleasure to see. It would stand to reason that maybe there is another good soul on the planet that would also be a champion for Grayskull. It would probably nice and funny to see Skeletor and Lyn find their way out of the darkness and stumble eventually into the light. I think that would be a real treat to read someday from you. Take care.

Awesome job! Its been a long time since I've hoped everyday I checked that there would be another chapter, and thankfully you were a regular updater. I will be saddened not to be reading anymore, but all great stories must come to an end.

You have a remarkable talent for writing, and this story was a pleasure to read! Hope to be reading more down the road (as long as Adora and Sea Hawk are along for the ride..wink wink).

Thanks for the great read!

Awesome ending! Thank you, thank you, thank you for sharing this story. I hope you continue it!

I loved Skeletor's letter. Too funny. Finally Adam gets some rest. Yay! Weddings soon? LOL

well done...although the idea of Skeletor returning to help, maybe not Adam but Adam's son?

It was a wild ride - thanks for the journey.