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Silverlake
2009-09-20 . chapter 2
Very funny!
AlannaCullen24
2008-11-29 . chapter 2
Great job I loved it
maggierg09
2008-06-30 . chapter 2
Ha, ha. This is well done. You're keeping everyone in character well, and I like Daine's reaction to Numair's latest "friend." I will definitely read any future updates - I just hope they come sooner than this one did. :)
oirishgoddess
2008-06-26 . chapter 2
HAHHA :D so daine DOES have a rebellious streak?! ohh-

*grins* loved it, alot. was very funny! i loved daine's last sentence, about using the dress for bedding. and i liked how even at this young stage daine was jealous of numair's ladys (although to be honest, if that lady had shoved a dress at ME, i think i'd do the same thing, regardless!)

brilliant drabble. i really hope you keep this up. well done! :)
Hedgewitchery
2008-06-25 . chapter 2
LOL! :D
Tortall101
2008-06-24 . chapter 2
HaHa - very funny - i love Daine's revenge :D
Da One Me to Pwn You All
2008-06-23 . chapter 2
That was awesome, good job!
hangout4ever
2008-06-23 . chapter 2
hahahahahaha. im laughing so hard. i loved that last chapter! that was so funny!
sarramaks
2008-06-23 . chapter 2
Hehe! You've captured Daine perfectly here - and made her seem her age too! Lovely chp.
Odd.Aly.
2008-06-23 . chapter 2
I like these they are funny!
lily moonlight
2008-06-23 . chapter 2
I really enjoy your Tammy Pierce stories, so was very pleased to see this :) I liked how I could get a handle on the characters straight away, especially Daine, usually agreeable, but now, 'using pitch fork motions that might have ripped and shredded any hapless creature in the way.' And of course the little mystery as to why she should be feeling this way. Loved her sarcasm about the not wearing a uniform and carrying a duster. Then the reason for her unhappiness. I got such a sense of movement from her as well, both emotionally and physically.
Onua I loved too, a very wise lady, wise enough to see the humour in what Daine has done with the dress. I laughed very much :D
starsfadein
2008-06-22 . chapter 2
Clever and enjoyable drabble =)
ama-chan13
2007-11-06 . chapter 1
Ooh! so good!~ama
Zoe the Special girl
2007-11-06 . chapter 1
this is soo cute hurry and write another one x
Da One Me to Pwn You All
2007-11-05 . chapter 1
^_^
Sorry. I can't think of anyhting meaningful to write:P
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