|Reviews for Razor Burn|
| dwparsnip 11/8/07 . chapter 2
Great addition...and the mustache bit was hilarious.
It's all good.
| Browniesprite 11/8/07 . chapter 2
Oh very nice. While not your typical BMWW power struggle, it captures the essence of their relationship perfectly.
And just sexy enough to be intriguing, but without falling victim to so many power-struggle fics that end up having one of them toss the other onto the floor and humping like animals.
...not that there's anything wrong with that. :-)
| Kipling Bunny 11/7/07 . chapter 2
Bacon is the pixie dust of the food world...
And... Coconut Lime Verbena! You're too nice. :D
So. Waxing IS painful. I even feel bad for poor 'basically invulnerable' Diana. Bruce took his revenge.
This was so adorable, I love it. It's a great ending, since it keeps the imagination going as to whether Bruce waxes her non-existent mustache. haha
| myrthill 11/5/07 . chapter 1
one question please, what is 5 o'clock shadow?
| Hexell 11/3/07 . chapter 1
Oh please let him wax her legs :)) That's terrible for any girl. And damn... She must feel it also :]
Keep it up!
This was really funny.
| Grendle1853 11/1/07 . chapter 1
Pretty funny. I enjoyed reading it.
| teh Maggot is sneaky 10/31/07 . chapter 1
Bernabeu, Gerard P.
| Kipling Bunny 10/31/07 . chapter 1
"I don't wear aftershave." That is THE best. Poor Bruce.
I do wonder how they got to that point to begin with.
He lost a chess re-match, no doubt. ;) J/k...
I really love this little oneshot (though a leg waxing continuation would be fun). It's so cute.
I have some ideas as to what GB is, though I'm not certain. :P
| bmwwromancefangirl 10/31/07 . chapter 1
hee hee! Very cute! Keep it up, les amie-that's French!
| karith 10/31/07 . chapter 1
I like that it's cute
| Proponent of EVO 10/31/07 . chapter 1
Yes, Bruce! Get your revenge!
| Browniesprite 10/31/07 . chapter 1
This has a very real feel to it. Bruce, having difficulty giving up control, Diana taking control...but being just a touch reckless, like she can't quite resist making the man hurt just a little.
I like your style. You paint vivid pictures without resorting to unnecessary exposition.
Great work in this, and all of your stories
| Hepburn 10/31/07 . chapter 1
Hey! That was fun! I really liked it and it was a lovely surprise to find your story in my in box!
I am so glad that you are back writing!
Take care!: )
| Miguel Dubn 10/31/07 . chapter 1
Uh-oh! Next time Diana better let Batman do his own shaving. He might get some serious pleasure when he gets to wax her legs. And I say WHEN because The Batman always manages to get payback when someone gets to do some kind of wrong to him, be it intentional or not.
Diana, while you still can... RUN!
| Whigmus Lister 10/31/07 . chapter 1
OK, I gotta know... what did she do to make him agree to that?