XD The ending was priceless
I loved it!

OMG This was really great, and super cute. Great job, and you write really well.
~Sister Kitty~

LOL!! I loved the ending! The note from Axel and Roxas! XD Hilarious! Great job!

This was very enjoyable to read~

lol I wouldn't say that this was an accurate representation of the characters, but if they were in like "real life" as portrayed here, I think it could be possible. I kinda guessed the ending, though it was still hilarious! <3

I love the note from Axel and Roxas there at the end. XD

Good fic, cute lemon story and interesting inspiration you have there.

i know it

OMG!! That was awesome! Haha! Great ending! I sorta had a feeling something like that would happen, but it still was just as funny!

hahaha great job! loved reading this! :D

I. Loved. It. It was fabulous and cute and hot and hilarious! XD Great job! And Axel and Roxas' note at the end made me hysterical. Teehee!

-Savvy ♥

OH MY GOD. xD
That was such a great story, and I love the note at the end. rofl.
Justimagine if those two couples met up after that?
ROFL.
Sequel? Yes? Please?

Haha! I love the note at the end. :D

And you write great smut. I mean, alright, I was a little disappointed by the fact that they would jump to sex so quickly when it was their first time, because... well, that didn't seem very realistic. Of course, this was a oneshot so it's excusable.

Your style in this fic is very readable and I'm thinking I'll go read some more of your stuff now. :3

-Minikimii

oh the hypocrisy lol

Ha ha ha ha..
Oh it had to be Roxas and Axel huh?
That was great.

Sorry, but once I saw that the story just became amazing.
And as you can tell I am hyper so I am gonna stop rambling before I begin.

oh my god. "Screw Yourgirlfriend Gently" thats amazing. the whole story was just funny as hell. and cute too! good job!