Another great story that feels as eloquently depressing as that scene in Mai Hime. Why does it have to be so complicated?! *tearing hair out* Yeah, because it's more like real life and a more interesting story, I get it *walking away and sulking*

translated from French
your history is too well it is for as the continuation
if you like it is pity of poor reader acro and to forsake

Damn. Now I wish there was more.

Just beautiful.

Hi

i really enjoyed reading your story. but common were could be more or?! i mean hell that was to good to stop and i was kind of disappointed that it stopped after the second chapter ^^". Well A small part of me still hopes that you may one day pick up on the story and continue it :P or maybe just me being silly!^^

Great plot, I really love this fic very much. Thank you for the great story.
Wishing you all the best and hope to read more works from you.
Take good care

You know, I'm typically not one for sad endings, but I can at least imagine this one getting better later on. It certainly is interesting to see Natsuki be the one more interested in their relationship here, in contrast to your other (and most other) fics where Shizuru's the one pursuing it. Gah, it stops just where it gets interesting to me! Ikezu...

I do hope I'm not too much of the reason you stopped writing, but I apologize if I am. Keep up doing what you want to, and I hope you can find enjoyment in another fic or two, for your own sake if nothing else.

Very good fic though I wish there had been more to it. It feels as if you've only just got started here. Out of curiousity do you plan to dabble in this little universe that you've created anytime in the near future?

In my imagination those two will eventually get together. :) Thanks for completing this great story. It's one of the better vampire stories I've read!

Wow where'd u been!it'd been a long...LONG time! i thought that u're not going to update all of ur stories!
i'm VERY GLAD(i beg u know that!)...

it's good to see u again! Will u update the other stories too? u know i very miss "give in" very much...but eveything it's up to u right? haha i just hope that someday u'll update again...

**Thank a lot for comeback to this fanfic+update this story**

--Take care--

Beautifully written chapter. Worth the long wait.

It was very emotional and tense. The ending was very nice; bitter sweet. If it's just a creative piece of work, leaving there leaves the audience breathless and astound. But we, the Shiznat fans, can't help but wish for a continuation.

Hope you return to write more. Good luck with everything and hope to see more of your works.

Wow, didn't think that you'd continue this..so, guess how ecstatic I was when I see a new chapter (although it's the last one)...it was a great story :) Thanks, author!

Keep on writing~~

oi author! Halloween stories are suppose to be scary not sad. x.x

Can't you just writ a few more chapters, and end it? ^.^ Like them together end it...

Worth.
The.
Wait.

Welcome back. How long have you been gone? 2 years?!
You are right, their story still continue, someone just needs to continue it for us shiznat fans one of thes day.
Maybe you might change your mind in the future, who know -wink wink-
I'm very disappointed that it ends like this. It' just cruel for bring them together and can't be together. Gosh, I wish Shizuru just spend a night with Natsuki, "let's make up" -fufu
Natsuki will sure go after Shizuru or her heart will never be satisfied because it's longing for Shizuru. Shizuru will probably flirt her ways around to forget about Natsuki.

Hmm, why didn't you give Natsuki to Shizuru for one night before they part way, as a trick-or-treat reward.
And I'm guessing Shizuru is not just a merely elder, maybe someone more important...

Oh, and I just have to add this: ...with your comeback, I hope you update "Giving In". In your voting poll, it comes in first place, than this story comes in second. Since you updated this one, I hope you won't forget "Giving In"..
I'm glad you return. I just can't believe you didn't miss us ::P :P

Wow,
What a delight, it has been forever since i have checked this and to my surprise one of my fav stories is completed! Very very pleasantly surprised. Thank you for finishing this (and yes i will definitely be thinking of a later date romance - cause i am wired that way) :)
I am glad you are doing ok, and i hope that 'busy' is good kind of busy (Since my busy is the torturous kind).
As always, a pleasure to read your work. Feel free to write whenever you see fit :P
Cheers,
RPX
PS. Kudos to your gf for the idea.