Oh my goodness. This is just so, so, so SAD! The image of Al not able to stop crying, and Ed not able to start, just sitting in this room transmuting flower after flower after flower. It's too much!

D'8

Sapphireswimming

This has exactly 1,234 words...Is that a coincidence?

Sad, but good. I suck at reviewing things, sorry.

this really is beautiful. The characters aren't ooc, and this sounds like it really could have been in the manga or anime. great job!

Excellent foreshadowing in the last paragraph. You have great talent.