WOW.

This was amazing. Perfect Syelle-ness.

Post more soon- and hopefully some good Pemma?

Okay, so I'm reviewing all the last three (the SyElle ones) because I can't be bothered to review each on its own
Sylar is SO Elle's kitten :) Yay!
I loved this chapter too. Lots.

Commence creepy music... the carnies are creepers. Well, Lydia's not, but I also don't care for her very much, so I don't care if she DOES end up turning on Samuel.

This is really clever. The idea that Elle might somehow still be alive, still lingering out there somewhere, waiting... it's brilliant.

Hope to see more Syelle from you, as well as some more Pemma, because you write them very well. And maybe some more Molly, if you get inspired for it?

Oh god, Elle WOULD do that...

I knew I'd get around to this eventually. This was added to the Pemma community, so I knew there'd be at least one dealing with them.

Truth? That's the reason I was reading all these. And I'm VERY glad I did, because they were all awesome. And now I'm off to read the rest, and I leave you with this final thought:

PETER/EMMA FTW!

*meep*

Usually when people write stuff regarding dreams for Heroes, they write about one of the Petrellis, or possibly Isaac, or rarely a little bit of Molly love.

Using as it a prompt for a Niki/Jessica fic, though... that's brilliant. Generally perfect, as always.

Wow. Mega-wow.

How is it that a tiny little thing, just a couple short paragraphs, can cut right down to the heart of it all? Syelle is one of my faves (I think it's one of just about everyone's faves, honestly), but this just makes it... seem more, you know?

You ALMOST made me feel sorry for Angela...

And that's saying a lot.

Yeah, she was seriously messed up at the start of Season 4 wasn't she? But I guess that's why they're calling it Redemption, isn't it?

You're doing an amazing job with writing a little something for everyone. I really appreciate that.

MOLLY!

I won't lie to you, Molly is one of my favorites. She has so much potential, and not just because she's a child. There's just something mystical about her, something a little more... well, none of the other characters touch MAGIC the same way Molly does. Maybe Peter comes close, but Molly is a whole new level of transcending. There's a kind of innocent wisdom about her, you know? I think you captured that perfectly. It's a snapshot, but it's not. It's a little bit of insight into her soul, and the naive-but-not-naive-anymore way she sees the world.

WOW.

Hiro is another surprisingly underwritten character. You wouldn't think so, because he's a main character, unlike most of the unloved ones, but although he turns up frequently in epic!fics, it's usually a Petrelli- or Sylar-centric one and Hiro's just sort of there to add color or another body.

This, though, I like. You've captured the essence of Hiro and put a little something unique on there as well. :)

And thus was confirmed precisely what Claire's "type" is. I like it that Gretch actually sort of FITS that type, except for the fact that she's female.

Which has almost nothing to do with your fic, except that I LOVE C/G. This is great, though. I wish we'd seen more of Fish Kid, because he actually had some potential as a character, unlike SOME people (coughcoughMAYAcoughcough)

Hehe, Sylinder. I've never found a really good serious Sylinder fic, but I always love it when people parody it. It's probably one of the easiest ships to do so, and the end result is without variation hilarious.

This, however, is very sexy and well-thought-out. I guess everything looks good in a oneshot, but on the other hand, not all oneshots are created equal...

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Is it horrible that it took me all the way up until Cold Snap to stop seeing Tracy and think "Niki" and keep talking about her as Niki despite what I always knew? And then she had to go all heroic self-sacrifice and the balance tipped, and one sister died by fire and the other by ice.

And then of course they retconned, but oh well. I like Tracy now, and I think you really captured the spirit of that manipulative side of her.

WOOT! I always want these minor characters who sort of drift through the background telling their own beautiful tales to be drawn a little deeper into the Petrelli web. Or rather, not Angela (or Arthur, or Nathan)'s web of lies, but Peter's safety net. He's gonna save the world, one way or another, and we all know it. But a little help from someone like Monica wouldn't hurt.

This was awesome. Monica is so underwritten, I can't believe there isn't more out there about her.