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| Gema227 2008-04-10 ch 18, | abuseOh boy...it was just a special features chapter. Ah wel, I love these kinds of chapters anyway, so no big deal. Loved the alternative ending! As for the two previews, I loved how both sounded. Props for the "Spring Awakening" title! But, when it comes down to it, my SandleAngst love is pulling me towards "Face Of The World". Great job on this story, it was superb! ~Gema~ |
| Gema227 2008-03-31 ch 17, | abuseOh god! Not Greg as well! Jesus...I still have the next chapter to plow through so hopefully it will anwser some of my questions. Excellent chapter. I loved how you kept the general air of the chapter light but there was a steady current of something-not-so-right underneath. Great job! ~Gema~ |
| Mma63 2008-03-26 ch 18, | abuseOne thing I admire in you is that you're always trying to somehow share your work with your readers. That's great because make us feel more involved with it. I think you've chosen the best ending, and I agree whit you about dropping Greg/Sara/Grissom and Nick/Cath spots. Missed Brass, too. The previews are quite impressive but I tend to "The Dark I know Well" instead of "Face of the world" now. Reason is there are lots of romantic and sad pieces about Sara's departure or her "death" in the site lately and few with Nick and Greg (most of them slash). I'd like to read more about their friendship. They are the most emotive guys in the team, opposites at times but very alike at other moments and both keep secrets and ghosts, its challenging. I loved the way you explored it in Salam - one of the strongest fics I found in Fanfiction). Hope to see you soon. Hugs. |
| PisceanPal23 2008-03-25 ch 17, | abuseYou did awesome for someone not interested in the story anymore. I hate it when my interest in writing something wavers, because it does affect the caliber. However, your fic was awesome:D Your ideas for new fics also seem great, so I can't wait until you start posting then! Once again, awesome job, great fic! |
| Mma63 2008-03-25 ch 17, | abuseWell, can't deny I got disappointed with this rushed ending. I loved the story since the beginning and the idea of have together CSI and RE4 was no doubt, quite exciting, specially because I knew you have the skills of working on it. I understand sometimes we hit the wall and inspiration seems to vanish, it can happen to anyone. I thought you could had explored Ada/Nick/Sara in Las Vegas outside the hospital a little bit more and made it more challenging to Leon, Grissom and Greg in their return from Spain. Anyway it was a very enjoying ride. |
| Ray of Starlight 2008-03-24 ch 18, | abuseThis was awsome. That's all I can really say. I loved reading it. It was intense, there was action and now I'm really worried about Greg. Awsome job! :-D -Ray |
| Dark Twinkling Star 2008-03-24 ch 18, | abuseGood ending! |
| NoDakGrl 2008-03-24 ch 17, | abuseDid I miss something? It's like there were 2 or 3 chapters that were supposed to be in between 16 and 17 and I missed out. This story was so promising and the ending sucked so bad. I'm sorry it did. I am really disappointed at the rush job ending. |
| CSIvHP11 2008-03-24 ch 18, | abusenice ending, escpesialy the way you left it hanging with Greg. I love the mock ending, that funny |
| Ray of Starlight 2008-03-17 ch 16, | abuseWell, I was wondering if Luis would die since he died in the game. Still bummed out. But at least their getting out of there right. Hope they make it back in time. "Dr. Wong" is acting funky. Looking forward to more! :-D -Ray |
| PisceanPal23 2008-03-17 ch 16, | abuseSister colony? That doesn't sound good. I'm still guessing about where you're going with this, I still have no definite idea. So, as usual, I can't wait for more. Hope the plot bunnies start up again:) |
| 9ud9ir190ne6ad 2008-03-15 ch 16, | abuseAt least they're out of there. Please update soon! |
| Grand Puba of All The Smurf... 2008-03-13 ch 16, | abusePoor, poor Luis...I was just starting to like him... |
| Dark Twinkling Star 2008-03-12 ch 16, | abuseSweet! |
| NoDakGrl 2008-03-12 ch 16, | abuseAnother great chapter. I am looking forward to the finish. I knew Dr. Wong was full of it. I just hope Nick and Sara get better. |