Are you going to update any your stories any time soon? Cause I really like'em.

This is the one of the greatest TR fanfic I have ever read! You really have a skill for writting and drawing. Poor Valence. I feel really sorry for him getting kicked around by Nemesis Prime. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon when you get the chance! ;P

Finally! A new chapter! This is a really good chapter. I got a good laugh of imagining Ratchet sawing Optimus' head because of his spacing out and daydreaming. I find it very amusing of reading Jazz getting bored with the meeting and falling into stasis. I wonder what it would be like when Valence gets better and goes around the Ark and then he runs into the Dinobots, the humans, and...the twins aka the Autoboobs. (It's just a nickname that I gave to hte twins). This is exciting! Does this invoved with that Impending Doom comic strips of yours on deviantart? No, wait! Don't tell me! I wanna find out myself!
No, just leave your prologues the way it is right now, because when I got e-mails telling me that you updated this fanfic, I was disappointed to find out that it was only one chapter instead of two and the reason is that you broke the prologue into twos. Please just leave it the way it is now so that we can know the differences. I really love your TF fanfics. You're a really talented artist and an author...and congratulation on your black belt in karate! I prefer Aikido, but all martial arts are fine and cool! Update soon when you get the chance, that and your TF drawings/comic strips! They're awesome and so are you!

Skyfire's a smart guy. Me likes him.

*Intermission for fan-girl moment*

SQUEE! ZOMG YAY! :D

*End intermission*

I hope we get the see more of the lambos in the next chapter! But the story's great so far!

This chapter was amazing! I just love the plot twists in this story! It was great to see Skyfire at the end giving his own theory. He doesn't seem to get much credit as a scentist or get many appearances, but I loved how you put him in. Maybe he can make an another appearance in this story? I also can't wait to see if Optimus reveals what Alpha Trion told him. I also can't believe the name of the mystery transformer I saw in your animation is Nemesis Prime. Plus Valence sounds like an interesting transformer. I can't wait to read what happens next.

This is certainly snowballing, and wow, Valence is a kink to put it mildly! I love the bit between Siders and Sunny about his feeling that something was wrong. Followed by the Q and A where all the answers were slightly wrong and yet true...and both Prime and Ratchet are left shrugging! Jazz falling asleep at the classified meeting and leaving the door open for Skyfire and his theory...this is such a wonderful complex story...I'm off to watch your DA animation again and laugh my head off!!

Wow, finally an update! :D

When I saw the name Nova Prime being mentioned, for a second I was thinking of Nova Prime from the IDWverse, then I saw Unicron...

I like this chapter indeed. Even though our favourite twins didn't make much appearance in the chapter it is still a good one. There's one thing confused me, however, that Optimus was oblivious of the existence of Quintessons or the Cybertronian history of Revolution. He is a Matrix-bearer, isn't he? Rodimus Prime has learned such knowledge of the Revolution with the help of the Matrix, so I was thinking maybe Optimus has too. Afterall, he has been holding the Matrix for so long, much longer than Roddy has.

i totally did not see that coming. you completely threw me. and it was awesome. please update soon.

ZOMG, AWESOME!
XD
That's so frakkin' cool!
I mean the time travel and-and the TWINS!
NEW DIMENSION!
\/\/007!
-insert happy dance here-

Totally kick Ass. This story is awesome. I've loved it since I've first read the first chapter. Its orginal very very well written and a joy to read.
I can't wait until you update again.
Pretty please with a cherry on top:P

I think Prowl's logic circuits will be overloaded on this theory...

That was an amazing chapter. I loved the light banter between Ratchet And Optimus, and the line about the crowbar made me giggle. I really enjoy the way you've been fleshing out each individual 'bot's personality, nd I hope you will update agian soon!

This was an awesome update. I suspected the 'con was from an alternate reality, but I never expected him to be... well... from way in the past. Things are getting interesting now. :)

Talk about quite the trip through the wires. Contradictions and curiosity abound.

Some of the spacing are missing between words.

Gold optics...? I think that suits better to Armada Optimus... *shrugs* Eh, your choice.

Wow! This is so amazing! I love the complex web you've managed to weave with a contrasting, almost-simplistic writing style - well done!

Also, I love Sideswipe and Sunstreaker here...