Haha that was cute. Just now found your account.

nice one

YAY SMUT I LOVE SMUT ALMOST AS MUCH AS SMEX

I don't know how happy coconut candy makes you but review for you! Gary and Ash were so hot! And yeah you wrote an awesome GaryXAsh story without mkaing Misty look horrible. In fact you made her supah awesome so kudos to you. Please continue writing! -

haha, neat ending - XD kaiwaii, realy odd Halloween fic XD *why i am reading them in June is a complete mystery to me though XD*

Hi Kit

Since you reviewed a couple of my stories, I thought I should review some of yours. :)

Um...wow. I don't usually read yaoi (some of it gives me nightmares, to be honest) but this was actually very well-written. You have developed a certain technique of putting in just the right amount of detail to satisfy an unfamiliar reader, yet at the same time you make people want more to happen. I personally wouldn't WANT to know what Gary ans Ash were doing in the closet, but that's just my opinion. I try to keep an open mind as much as possible.

Like I said, a very good writing technique. Kudos!

Ah! WHat a sexy story *_* I loved it!

melts into a puddle and dreams about ash and gary

Ah.

interesting XD

Great story!

Aww...I feel so sad AD! :( I couldn't make a Halloween fic in my timeframe, I had about 6 assignments and 2 concerts all at the same time..._;

But, after reading your fic made me happy - even though it's ages away from Halloween. I love how you portray everything. The timing, dialogue, vocab - everything's great! I'll give you my HOLY BENEVOLENT...THUMBS! :D d _ b Your ideas are so great that I feel like killing you and stealing them, but I'm too nice :P

Keep Writing, and Smiling! :D

KLP - you'll know who I am ;)

Well well WELL, what have we here? A cross-dressed Ash? How lovely! This reminds me of a picture I drew...it's on deviantart, now. It actually DOES have Ash in a Lolita gown w/ hat and umbrella. He looks rather cute. Ironically, the title is 'Too Feminie'. XD I advise you go look!

Really cute and funny! The image of Ash swearing is especially hilarious XD

Sorry to nitpick, but you misspelled a word...the second time you mention the hotel suite, you spell 'suite' as 'sweet' . Not that it detracted from the story of course - I just caught it right now while glancing through the story a second time.

Thanks for the dedication

That was so awesomely cute!

KYAH!

I felt like a complete fangirl while I was reading this!

A somewhat hesistent Gary, a mention of Paul, and cross-dressing Ashy-boy!

I REALLY want to draw Ash in a Lolita dress now! Then I'll scan it at school and give it to you as a super plus Halloween gift!

XD Ash WAS pretty bold! -hugs him- I love you Ash, but hate Misty for stuffing you in a dress. He looked too cute in it! -fangirl scream-