I loved the flow, and the way you presented the characters... I really like this idea.
Nice Job!

So... the way this is written, I take it that Amon and Robin were seperated during the fall of the Factory, and he thinks that she's dead?
I guess my only complaint about this is not enough Amon; but then, this story is more about how others see him, isn't it?
This works perfectly well as a one-shot, but if you're toying with the idea of continuing this at all, I'm putting in a vote for yes please. I'd like to see how the Scoobies would react to Robin, and the prospect of seeing Robin and Amon reunited after the Factory through someone else's eyes is fascinating.

I thought you got Giles character pretty well and you honestly have me interested, looking forward to more. Toodles,
Katie