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| spencerthekat 2008-03-12 ch 5, | abuseOnly Lilly would land on a bridge and be afraid of heights...lol NO...Jeff fell thru the boards of that dumb bridge! OH - what an exciting situation that was! ::gasps: YAY - Friendly Face Bobby's in this story :) Love the concept of the VAP program, smart idea to keep everyone safe in the field. p.s. WHAT!! My voyage with Lilly is over!! :( Please write another Lilly story - I like her - she's all quirky and different!! This was a EXCELLENT STORY. A :-) |
| spencerthekat 2008-03-12 ch 4, | abuseAgain - the boys are there to help out! :O OMG - I wonder if it was it a Drake strike to get his hands on the new omni! OK...now I know that Bogg comes up with some hairbrained ideas - but robbing the ppl...PRICELESS! This was a great quick action packed chapter! OMG - the AVALANCHE!! OH NO! AWESOME JOB :) |
| spencerthekat 2008-03-12 ch 3, | abuseOMG - she got her hands on the morphine, she certainly is a spitfire...HA HA HA!! Me thinks that Bogg doth protest to much when it comes to Lilly! Maybe another time they'll see each other again...sigh!! |
| spencerthekat 2008-03-12 ch 2, | abuseWhen will the boys learn that they need to dress in layers! You would think by now that Jeff would have picked up a sweatshirt or something...lol! Oh wait, there's always the kindness of strangers to get them clothes...doh!! Of all the people to run into Calamity Jane! OW - that would not have been a good thing for Lilly to drown in the mud trying to help with the medicine. Boy she hits a nerve with Bogg, huh!?! :O What a cool Omni - love the yellow light concept. p.s See - my poor Jeffy's still having nightmares from POTO :O ROFLOL! |
| spencerthekat 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseA Voyager afraid of heights...lol! Well that will make for some interesting voyages. Lilly seems like a character, she has some very interesting quirks and interests. But remind me never to get near her in the Anti-Gravity Chamber...lol! What a great idea in having Olivia as the teacher for this course - I'm sure she has some stories to tell from her days voyaging. I wanna practice too - that sounds like fun. Boy sounds like the OCC worked ** making sure these new Omni's weren't as tough on their bodies as before - glad to see though, that the old feature is still available...roflol! :) This looks like it is going to be a fun story to read :-) |
| DaynaWayna 2007-11-02 ch 5, | abuse:O ::gasp!:: I NEED A HERO! I'm gonna CRY! Good tears, I guess, but still! Ginger, that was a great story! :) I like Lilly, and I really like that you can write a whole new female character for Bogg and not once reference Kayla! I'm very impressed! And as for Lilly's last assignment... what an interesting way to make a green light! Very clever. :) Congrats on a job well done. I'm looking forward to more stories with Lilly! :) |
| DaynaWayna 2007-11-02 ch 4, | abuseGOOD LORD! First she gets smooshed by a wagon, takes morphine AND alcohol (with sickening results), and THEN nearly dies on a doomed train in an avalanche!?!?! Remind me to never become one of your characters... EVER! ROFLOL! I love these little pieces of voyages... it's very different from the 10,0,0,0 word stories we tend to write. ::giggles:: Little snippits are really cool. But only one more chapter to go? Sadness. :( |
| DaynaWayna 2007-11-02 ch 2, | abuseWow... you go right for the drama, don'tcha? Nearly drowing in mud on your first voyage?? Poor kid! Ah, but to be rescued by the handsome Phineas Bogg... le sigh. :) Another rousing chapter, well written and full of mini-angst. Me likie. (noticed some grammatical problems; they weren't bad cuz the RPOD didn't even twitch. ::giggles:: The PPOH will send you an email soon. ::wink:: ) Looking forward to the rest of the story, and finding out just what that yellow light does! :) |
| DaynaWayna 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseAw! How cute! I like Lilly so far. Great start Mrs. B. :) I love how you've 'gone techincal' here... brave, brave woman. I wouldn't even BEGIN to try to explain Voyager technology! I think I'm gonna like this one. :) |
| Leanne 2007-11-01 ch 5, anon. | abuseJeepers...she certainly gets herself into some peculiar situations!! :) What a fun character ~ looking forward to seeing what other predictaments she can get herself into!! |
| Peeper Stockwell 2007-10-31 ch 5, | abuseVERY NICE! Loved it! I actually finnished reading a story in one night..kept me, well, invierating (sp). Hm, that last song sounds oddly familiar! LOL Great Job, ginger! |
| Peeper Stockwell 2007-10-31 ch 2, | abuseI'm REALLY loving this one, ginger! Hehehehe, how is Bogg gonna handle with TWO kids? LOL |
| Peeper Stockwell 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseall right, ginger! Now I KNOW you've been busy-or just plain bored and needed something to do. LOL I think I'm going to like Lilly-a character I could get to know. Nice work. Now I'll have a bedtime story for tonight! LOL Peeper (Sari) |