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spencerthekat
2008-03-12
ch 5,
abuseOnly Lilly would land on a bridge and be afraid of heights...lol
NO...Jeff fell thru the boards of that dumb bridge! OH - what an exciting situation that was! ::gasps:

YAY - Friendly Face Bobby's in this story :) Love the concept of the VAP program, smart idea to keep everyone safe in the field.

p.s. WHAT!! My voyage with Lilly is over!! :( Please write another Lilly story - I like her - she's all quirky and different!! This was a EXCELLENT STORY. A :-)
spencerthekat
2008-03-12
ch 4,
abuseAgain - the boys are there to help out! :O OMG - I wonder if it was it a Drake strike to get his hands on the new omni!

OK...now I know that Bogg comes up with some hairbrained ideas - but robbing the ppl...PRICELESS!

This was a great quick action packed chapter! OMG - the AVALANCHE!! OH NO! AWESOME JOB :)
spencerthekat
2008-03-12
ch 3,
abuseOMG - she got her hands on the morphine, she certainly is a spitfire...HA HA HA!! Me thinks that Bogg doth protest to much when it comes to Lilly! Maybe another time they'll see each other again...sigh!!
spencerthekat
2008-03-12
ch 2,
abuseWhen will the boys learn that they need to dress in layers! You would think by now that Jeff would have picked up a sweatshirt or something...lol! Oh wait, there's always the kindness of strangers to get them clothes...doh!!

Of all the people to run into Calamity Jane! OW - that would not have been a good thing for Lilly to drown in the mud trying to help with the medicine.

Boy she hits a nerve with Bogg, huh!?! :O What a cool Omni - love the yellow light concept.

p.s See - my poor Jeffy's still having nightmares from POTO :O ROFLOL!
spencerthekat
2008-03-12
ch 1,
abuseA Voyager afraid of heights...lol! Well that will make for some interesting voyages.
Lilly seems like a character, she has some very interesting quirks and interests. But remind me never to get near her in the Anti-Gravity Chamber...lol! What a great idea in having Olivia as the teacher for this course - I'm sure she has some stories to tell from her days voyaging. I wanna practice too - that sounds like fun.
Boy sounds like the OCC worked ** making sure these new Omni's weren't as tough on their bodies as before - glad to see though, that the old feature is still available...roflol! :)
This looks like it is going to be a fun story to read :-)
DaynaWayna
2007-11-02
ch 5,
abuse:O ::gasp!:: I NEED A HERO! I'm gonna CRY! Good tears, I guess, but still! Ginger, that was a great story! :)

I like Lilly, and I really like that you can write a whole new female character for Bogg and not once reference Kayla! I'm very impressed!

And as for Lilly's last assignment... what an interesting way to make a green light! Very clever. :)

Congrats on a job well done. I'm looking forward to more stories with Lilly! :)
DaynaWayna
2007-11-02
ch 4,
abuseGOOD LORD! First she gets smooshed by a wagon, takes morphine AND alcohol (with sickening results), and THEN nearly dies on a doomed train in an avalanche!?!?!

Remind me to never become one of your characters... EVER! ROFLOL!

I love these little pieces of voyages... it's very different from the 10,0,0,0 word stories we tend to write. ::giggles:: Little snippits are really cool. But only one more chapter to go? Sadness. :(
DaynaWayna
2007-11-02
ch 2,
abuseWow... you go right for the drama, don'tcha? Nearly drowing in mud on your first voyage?? Poor kid! Ah, but to be rescued by the handsome Phineas Bogg... le sigh. :)

Another rousing chapter, well written and full of mini-angst. Me likie. (noticed some grammatical problems; they weren't bad cuz the RPOD didn't even twitch. ::giggles:: The PPOH will send you an email soon. ::wink:: )

Looking forward to the rest of the story, and finding out just what that yellow light does! :)
DaynaWayna
2007-11-02
ch 1,
abuseAw! How cute! I like Lilly so far. Great start Mrs. B. :) I love how you've 'gone techincal' here... brave, brave woman. I wouldn't even BEGIN to try to explain Voyager technology!

I think I'm gonna like this one. :)
Leanne
2007-11-01
ch 5, anon.
abuseJeepers...she certainly gets herself into some peculiar situations!! :) What a fun character ~ looking forward to seeing what other predictaments she can get herself into!!
Peeper Stockwell
2007-10-31
ch 5,
abuseVERY NICE! Loved it!

I actually finnished reading a story in one night..kept me, well, invierating (sp). Hm, that last song sounds oddly familiar! LOL

Great Job, ginger!
Peeper Stockwell
2007-10-31
ch 2,
abuseI'm REALLY loving this one, ginger! Hehehehe, how is Bogg gonna handle with TWO kids? LOL
Peeper Stockwell
2007-10-31
ch 1,
abuseall right, ginger! Now I KNOW you've been busy-or just plain bored and needed something to do. LOL

I think I'm going to like Lilly-a character I could get to know.
Nice work. Now I'll have a bedtime story for tonight! LOL

Peeper (Sari)
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