This was VERY good. Very sexy, and intimate, and its impressing how many dynamics you were able to weave into such a short fic. I feel sorry for Vincent in this; its not his fault he's just a misfit.
good job

Such an eerie feel during this whole story no matter how many times I reread it. Great job.

I loved it! The irony is brilliant, and the fic was awesome!!

Cool stuff...the desire, so intense and physical, yet completely asexual, is a fascinating thing.

i liked it...tho i can't help but wonder...why Hellmasker wanted to rip her apart but didn't...hmm...these things are worth mentioning...

Haunting, and vivid and sensual. I rather like Vincent's fixations with the flesh here, and the way he saw Tifa was alluring indeed. A remarkable piece. I like it.

I liked this oneshot! Very well written.

Mystic

O, creepy. The inside-outside and crazy fuck mentality was a lot of fun to read.

Yay crazy people.

~Cendri

That was nice and dark. I really liked seeing Vincent struggle with the duality of his nature and trying to resist the urges to experience Tifa; desiring her as Vincent and also as Hellmasker. Really interesting read for Halloween (I really meant to review this sooner).

What's nice about your shorter fiction is that, even though it isn't continuous (as in multi-chapter wise) it still feels complete. A lot of the time, it seems, writers struggle to compact the story into a certain frame while still making them interesting to read and not leaving gaping plot holes. Not everyone is able to accomplish this, and some, while accomplishing part of it, don't do it in an interesting to read way. Your stories are really wonderful and, even though I love to read a LOT of your work, it still feels satisfying to read the shorter ones too. I don't feel disappointed or like I'm looking for more.
Thank you!

This was amazing.

That was awesome in a delightfully creepy way. It had a sadistic yet great feel to it. That part about leaving her a scar and thinking of him was a very nice touch. It really intensified just the overall horror of it. A creepy piece that was definitely in the Halloween spirit.

...you are made of win and inspiration and also possibly cookies.

Hey Dark,

m, stlyistically, you've done a good job. I understand that you've accomplished exactly what you were going for. Since you clearly set out with an intent and purpose, you've done a good job at succeeding.

I wish you would've included some kind of disclaimer. This reads like a rape, Dark. It might not have been -explicitly- but ... it has really unpleasant undertones. Undertones is a polite way to say that.

It's something that I'm a little hypersensitive to. I'm sure that it wouldn't have bothered other people as much as it bothered me but, there it is. I'd highly recommend you put -something- in an AN or in the story description to give some people fair warning. I'm sure I'm not the only girl out there who is ... hypersensitive, like I said.

You know I love your writing, Dark. These things just aren't things that I handle very well. If I'd known what this was really going to be about, I'm not sure if I would've read it or not. Maybe because it's -you- ... but anyone else, certainly not.

Anyways, I respect that you set out with a writing goal in mind. It's just ... not my cup of tea, that's all.

-T. pirate

Wow. This one was very...well, dark. A lot darker than what I normally read, so I'm still a little off-guard.

Still, it was very good, and as always, very well-written. I actually read it to aloud to myself, and I couldn't help but go "Whoa..."

Maybe it's because I'm not quite so...ahem, hardcore...but the addition of Hellmasker just doesn't appeal to me much. I liked Tifa's little affections towards Vincent, such as when she said "I like being with you," but then Hellmasker came in and did his bit, and well...Tifa got hurt. From her point of view, it must have seemed like some sort of betrayel, and feeling like that is -- in my opinion -- one of the absolute worst sensations imaginable. Even if she'd realized what went on afterwards...it doesn't sit well with me.

Still, that's only my opinion. Even if the story's content didn't necessarily appeal to my admittedly noble and narrow mindset, that doesn't change the fact that you're still an astonishingly gifted writer, and I love reading your work.

Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.

Now that... at first I'm thinking it was a normal fic. As I dove father into it, the more sadistic it became. Wow,.. I'm at a loss for this. Amazing, stunning... and yes, I'm at a loss for words. Wonderful job :) Thanks so much for this little treat. I'm older than dirt so it's not like I'm getting any candy tonight but that's okay. I'd rather read a fanfic from you any day ;)