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Reviews For: Cobblestone

Netta Sloan 2007-11-06 ch 1,	abuseInteresting idea. The imagery brought to mind "The Wizard of Oz"
S J Smith 2007-11-01 ch 1,	abuseI really enjoyed this story a lot. Poor Al, trying to find something for Ed that he'd like and Ed not even caring...really. The only qualm I have is that Al says that he cannot sleep. His soul doesn't sleep inside the armor. Other than that, I really really love this story.
kuroxdoragon 2007-11-01 ch 1,	abuseI was wondering about the yellow chicken... lol
Ashyna 2007-11-01 ch 1, anon.	abuse...Wow! Wowowowow! I LOVE this! It's so original! ^_^. This was my favorite part out of the whoe thing! - "Amber cobblestone made him think of Winry. Winry made him think of home. Winry was home. And that was a feeling that Ed wanted to hold onto for as long as they couldn’t have that home. He was reminded of it, every time the cobblestone pathway stared up at him. And one day, Al would know. This had nothing to do with yellow chickens. Nothing at all."- You portrayed Ed and Al so well. Looking for something yellow for his brother is something Al would do. I also love you made the point that Winry wouldn't normally hold her arms out, most fanfiction writers wouldn't remember that. All in all, i really hope that you write more EdWin! You portray them so well! P.S. In the anime Al isn't able to seep in his armor...i don't know about the manga though. Ashyna