This is a good way to end your story. That sounds like something Erik would write. Very nice work writing this gorgeous story.

Oh, this chapter is so lovely. It's good to see the two meeting again after all the events of the play. It's nice to see that Christine has forgiven him of all he's done and to see they're now on friendly terms again. This is a nice extended ending to the story. Good work.

Good work with this story. It's good to see how Erik feels when Christine ripped his mask off during the performance. I always thought that was not very nice of her. I'm not sure what purpose that served other than humiliation. (Granted I haven't read the book yet-maybe it goes into more detail there.)

What more I love your description of Erik's feelings during "All I Ask of You." The phantom's actor during that scene in the movie did such a good job at displaying the amount of pain he feels and you also did a good job of showing that. It's nice to see what he's thinking during that moment.

Good work with this chapter.

This is a lovely chapter. You did a great job showing the events of the movie/book/play through Erik's eyes. I especially like that one line in the first paragraph, "Then, there was the night, when The Phantom of the Opera began to act as the moon, rotating around the soprano who was his world." Very beautiful and poetic.

Nice job with contrasting the voices of Christine and Carlotta. It's so romantic how often Erik refers to Christine's voice.

Good work with the hints of jealousy when he finds out about Raoul. This chapter is very interesting and well written.

Good work with this chapter.

This is such a sad chapter. Erik deserves to be loved. Nice job describing the rings Christine received. Nice chapter.

beautiful...now I want to read the novel, too _

I like the ending. That scene always brought tears to my eyes in the movie too. When you see the Phantom has left a rose. :-(

I've always wanted to sign something like the Phantom - O.G. lol!

Good job with this story. I really enjoyed it!

Jordy

Aww cute. I like the last sentence too. ;)

Last chapter now... Curses. :O

Jordy

I love Music of the Night. Unfortunately, I haven't seen the movie in a long time. I used to love it when it came out, but the movie disk has disappeared. :-(

[Oh, and personally I wouldn't mind if the Phantom secretly sung Don Juan with me. ;D]

Well anyway, I enjoyed this. Next chap.

Jordy

I simply love this description! Is it alright to say I am jealous? :-)

A conversation between Erik and Christine would sure be interesting.

Jordy

Just scrolled down your story list to find you're a Phantom fan as well as a Yu-Gi-Oh fan. Wow, neat! This sounds good, despite this chapter being short. I like this. Next chap.

Jordy

This was very cute. I liked the little song hehe. I normally don't. and the second to last line: he thought he heard the enchanted violin playing the tune to his vow to his love in song. -I teared up a little while.

I enjoyed this. Great job as always! _

Another great chapter full of fantastic plot and description _

I'm sure she'll see him...I hope she does.

I love how you describe the scenes. I can just imagine it! Good job _