Professor,

This was such a well crafted story. It was obvious that you started with a clever idea and had the end in mind as you breezed us through the story. Far too few writers have any vision of what the end of their story when they're halfway through.

The Simon and Garfunkel lyrics were such a nice touch.

Thank for the many hours that you spent on this. The final product is first rate.

Happy Thanksgiving,

Dave

This was, beyond a doubt, the best fanfic that I have ever read. Not only was it professional standard writing, it was an outstanding representation of what fanfiction is all about. You are clearly a true fan. You are a true artist and writer as well. I just came across this story a few days ago. I immediately became hooked and just had to finish it. You captured each character excellently. The twists and turns you added fit perfectly with the preexisting plot. It was amazing and I hope to read more from you in the future!

I especially like the description that you put into your stories. Some authors are brief while others apparently don't know when to quit. You strike a nice balance.

I wrote the review under the name "Craig" and I wanted you to be able to respond to my question so I'm writing this so you could actually reply.

I don't understand how Dobby died. He was freed from the Malfoy's in the second book as you know. He had no ties to them anymore. The bond between him and them was broken so how was he effected? Can you explain your reasoning please?

Hi,

This is a brilliant story. Thank you for sharing it.

This was incredible. I forgot how I found this, but it was well worth the read. I loved every moment, and loved every decision you made. Bravo on a masterpiece.

<3 Steel Scorpion

Screw Ron and just do your PDA already H and HR!

great story please keep up the good work can't wait to find out what happen's next please update soon

this is by far my favorite fanfic. excellently written. awesome story line. and i may have squirted a couple tears at the end of chapter 39 - and i dont cry ever. overall great story

Somehow i forgot to read the last chapters of this novel and now,looking back,have to repeat again and again - this is an exceptional achievement on fully professional level that,under different circumstances,would make you a bestselling author.

You,chem prof,truly are a devouted HP fan and that is why it is such an immense pleasure to read your stories.To be a fan of something one must cherish and respect what he stands for,putting the glory of chosen cause before primitive desires of self pleasure.Great majority of writers of the HP fandom are simply and plainly lying - they are too cowardly to try and write an original story of their own and use HP character and place names instead.You are one of the precious few of this fandom who tries to use only what is provided by the canonic text.As a result you are now the leader of Harmony movement and classic of HP fanfics.

Unfortunately,majority of people who claim to be HP fans are too mediocre intellectually to understand Hermione as a character.It is her not Harry that puts the main impetus behind the plotline.I may sound like a heretic but there is no realistic way to make a superHarry - the kid is barely above average.The real life career of such people is medium ranks of army or police.Actually the best real life prototype of Harry Potter is Yonatan Netanyahu - hero and fool of Entebbe.The towering genius of Hermione is not even comparable with Harry or any of her classmates.It was obvious from canon that she would reach the Dumbledores level of skill and knowledge by forty at latest.And since the wizarding world is that unique place where knowledge can be cashed in as some real power her miserable canonic career makes no sense.

I must disagree with you.The Harry Potter story first and foremost deals with the matters of Life and Death during the times of War.There is no way for peacetime relationships.Hogwarts students are divided by political and clan hatred and memories of the wartime losses.The very believable affection between Harry and Hermione is almost unique for the first five books - sorry,one has no need to be a textologist to reason that HBP and DH had a different author with no knowledge of the previous plot plans.A wartime love story - two outcasts drawn together by instinct for the sake of survival.That is what makes Harmony magnificent.

Absolutely wonderful. I wish i could putthis much work into a story. I will admit that this would have been a better story than the real harry potter. I love Harry/Hermione pairings. This is probably #2 on my list of favorites. (the other being forbidden love, as it was the first h/hr i read.) I'm glad that it had a happy ending and that the epilogue was in greater detail than J.K. Rowlings. (nothing against her. She is the reason you had anything to write about, of course.) Thank you for writing this. I may have to come back and read it again.

Jone-Z

I'm not sure if this is my second or third time reading this story, but I'm still amazed at how amazing this story has been written. You have addressed many of the problems that I had with the seventh book in particular. For that, I'm incredibly grateful. Keep up the amazing work and I cannot wait to read more of your work. =D
~SevsGirl89 (I sincerely hope that my username does not diminish this review in any way. lol)

I had this story some time back...I can't remember if I alerted it or not.

I was ready you just a dream..oh got to go review that in a minute.

I am currently trying my hand at writting HP fanfiction, but I love making graphics more...banners and icons.

Your story was very hard to read. There was to much heartache and pain, not that happy every after stuff...well at first.

But reading the author's not the second to last or last chapter...just read the last two chapter today.

And being married for 14-15 years...life isn't perfect. Love is just how you described it. Its the actions we show.

I totally agree...hermione SHOWED her love for Harry. OMG HBP movie the whole harry/ginny thing to ME was so unbleiveable..

I want to thank you for writting this story. Although it was hard for more to read, because to me I FELT the heartache, --I WAS IN PAIN MYSELF...I was in Hemrione's shoes, you put me in Hermione's shoes.-- I was so crying reading about how Hemrione lived with Harry not knowing her. OMG!

But I LOVED! you happy ending and the pace that it took for them/him to get his memories.

Beautifully written.

Fantastic story. I am so impressed with the writing and the characterization of this fic. I was a bit wary of the journal/letter format at first but you quickly assuaged those fears and drew me in to a fascinating and enchanting story. Your story is how I feel the seventh book should have been written and I thank you for taking the time to share it with the us.